|Teen Poetry #2|
since 2000-03-31Posts 162
Hi everyone. I did not write this poem. My friend did and she wants to post it here before she joins to see what Passions is like. Hope you enjoy it..she's got a real talent.
Why is the hole so small
In the place where my heart used to be
All of the love I had left to give
I gave it to you and you threw it at me
Oh, I don't know
I just don't know who you are anymore
You used to be kind
Now you don't even call
How can you share
What you feel in your heart about somebody else
When I'm right before you
It's like you don't even have a pulse
OH , you've changed
I don't know who you are at all
There are some things, I'll never understand
Now I know that you're not my man.
[This message has been edited by **Angel** (edited 04-17-2000).]
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since 2000-04-11Posts 46
Prior Lake, MN, USA
Very nice poem. Gosh, I can totally relate to it! I am going through this very thing right now with my boyfriend....its a pain in the butt.
since 2000-03-29Posts 55
Very awsome poem you wrote!Its so true and tells the truth.
since 1999-08-25Posts 176
Vey well written. Sound like it was written from the heart. I hope she keeps it up.
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