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FlipAngel Junior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 46Prior Lake, MN, USA |
Sometimes there is so much hatred that it makes me embarrassed to be human; to be among the ones who cause so much pain. Sometimes I cry so hard that the painful tears stain my face, and while I try to wipe them off, make the momories be gone a scar always remains. Sometimes life seems so unfair that I yell, scream, curse and lost grasp of all hope I had once possessed. But... Sometimes the world is so beautiful that I can barely take it all in its breathtaking beauty brings joyful tears to my eyes and replenishes my soul with love, hope, and LIFE. |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Very nice poem. And so very true in all respects, keep up the good work. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice From what I've tasted of desire, I hold with those who favor fire. But if it had to perish twice, I think I know enough of hate To say that for destruction ice Is also great, And would suffice. -Robert Frost |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Yeah, this poem is very good...I know what you mean about this darn world!! Keep posting! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
This an excellent poem. I can understand what you mean about this world. Keep posting! Lindsay |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
~~this is nice writing i feel. like the way you designed the verse~~~ good work FlipAngel~~~~~` |
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son of man Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 125 |
the scars of this world last forever, but the beauty of this world does not fade. though we have corrupted the innocence of its serenity, it somehow remains that this world is full of wonder and awe. perhaps human nature is summed up as good and evil, light and dark, beauty and horror. what a strange place... great poem. keep up the good work! |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
geez! the world really bugs me sometimes...the way in which it can cause people so much pain...it sucks to but it bluntly  but a great poem...coz to go with dark there is always light Bec i never thought i'd die alone, i laughed the loudest who'd have known? i traced the cord back to the wall, no wonder it was never plugged in at all i took my time, i hurried up the choice was mine i didn't think enough I'm too depressed to go on, you'll be sorry when i'm gone I never conquered, rarely came 16 just held such better days Days when i still felt alive, we couldn't wait to get outside The world was wide, too late to try The tour was over i'd survived I couldn't wait till i got home, to pass the time in my room alone I never thought i'd die alone, another six months I'll be unknown Give all my things to my friends, you'll never set foot in my room again You'll close it off, board it up Remember the time i spilled the cup Of apple juice in the hall, please tell mum this is not her fault I never conquered, rarely came But tomorrow holds such better days Days when i can still feel alive, when i can't wait to get outside The world was wide, the time goes by The tour is over, i've survived I can't wait till i get home, to pass the time in my room alone 'Adam's Song' Blink 182 |
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