|Teen Poetry #2
since 2000-04-11Posts 46
Prior Lake, MN, USA
there is so much hatred
that it makes me embarrassed to be human;
to be among the ones
who cause so much pain.
I cry so hard
that the painful tears stain my face,
and while I try to wipe them off,
make the momories be gone
a scar always remains.
life seems so unfair
that I yell, scream, curse
and lost grasp of all
hope I had once possessed.
the world is so beautiful
that I can barely take it all in
its breathtaking beauty
brings joyful tears to my eyes
and replenishes my soul with
love, hope, and LIFE.
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since 2000-03-09Posts 522
Very nice poem. And so very true in all respects, keep up the good work.
"Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.
Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice
From what I've tasted of desire,
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great,
And would suffice.
since 2000-01-25Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
Yeah, this poem is very good...I know what you mean about this darn world!! Keep posting!
Love and hugs,
"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
since 2000-03-31Posts 162
This an excellent poem. I can understand what you mean about this world.
since 2000-01-15Posts 2034
~~this is nice writing i feel. like the way you designed the verse~~~
good work FlipAngel~~~~~`
son of man
since 2000-04-25Posts 125
the scars of this world last forever,
but the beauty of this world does not fade.
though we have corrupted the innocence of its serenity, it somehow remains that this world is full of wonder and awe. perhaps human nature is summed up as good and evil, light and dark, beauty and horror.
what a strange place...
great poem. keep up the good work!
since 2000-02-12Posts 238
geez! the world really bugs me sometimes...the way in which it can cause people so much pain...it sucks to but it bluntly
but a great poem...coz to go with dark there is always light
i never thought i'd die alone, i laughed the loudest who'd have known?
i traced the cord back to the wall, no wonder it was never plugged in at all
i took my time, i hurried up
the choice was mine i didn't think enough
I'm too depressed to go on, you'll be sorry when i'm gone
I never conquered, rarely came
16 just held such better days
Days when i still felt alive, we couldn't wait to get outside
The world was wide, too late to try
The tour was over i'd survived
I couldn't wait till i got home, to pass the time in my room alone
I never thought i'd die alone, another six months I'll be unknown
Give all my things to my friends, you'll never set foot in my room again
You'll close it off, board it up
Remember the time i spilled the cup
Of apple juice in the hall, please tell mum this is not her fault
I never conquered, rarely came
But tomorrow holds such better days
Days when i can still feel alive, when i can't wait to get outside
The world was wide, the time goes by
The tour is over, i've survived
I can't wait till i get home, to pass the time in my room alone
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