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Take the Chance
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Take the Chance |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... 
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Take the Chance I’m taking the chance, I’m diving in with my eyes closed, I’m going to see what happen, So I don’t wake up and wish, Wish I had taken the chance. So close your eyes and feel me, Feel my heart reaching out to yours, Step into the deep end without a life jacket, Take the chance, See what happens, Where we go, What we do, What we feel, We can make a difference, To this world that’s given up, We can show them love, Show them it’s not where you’ve been, What you’ve done, It’s where you’re going, And what you’ll do, Leave that past behind you, Forget you’ve been hurt, Close your eyes and take the chance, I won’t lead you, I won’t guide you, For me eyes are closed also, We’ll lead each other, We’ll guide each other, Take the chance. |
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Olga Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152Brooklyn, NY, USA |
I really like ur poem,maybe cuz i can relate 2 it. Ur absolutely right, we should all take the chance! |
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*Nene* Junior Member
since 2000-03-15
Posts 16 |
I really enjoyed your poem because I'm going into that right now. |
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Blue Rose Junior Member
since 2000-04-20
Posts 18Vernonia OR USA |
I wish it was that easy. I would to be the person who could just take a chance, but unfortunatly I'm not so I guess I'll have to settle for telling you how much I liked your poem because I know that's not taking a chance, it's telling the truth! Keep up the good work! |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
I thought this was well written and has a good message....so back to the top it goes. Nice work... A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
ack! this poem makes me want to go and...well obviously...take a chance!!  i like the whole message of this piece...sends out a lot of convidence 'vibes' i thought keep up the great posting Bec  i never thought i'd die alone, i laughed the loudest who'd have known? i traced the cord back to the wall, no wonder it was never plugged in at all i took my time, i hurried up the choice was mine i didn't think enough I'm too depressed to go on, you'll be sorry when i'm gone I never conquered, rarely came 16 just held such better days Days when i still felt alive, we couldn't wait to get outside The world was wide, too late to try The tour was over i'd survived I couldn't wait till i got home, to pass the time in my room alone I never thought i'd die alone, another six months I'll be unknown Give all my things to my friends, you'll never set foot in my room again You'll close it off, board it up Remember the time i spilled the cup Of apple juice in the hall, please tell mum this is not her fault I never conquered, rarely came But tomorrow holds such better days Days when i can still feel alive, when i can't wait to get outside The world was wide, the time goes by The tour is over, i've survived I can't wait till i get home, to pass the time in my room alone 'Adam's Song' Blink 182 |
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