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since 2000-04-12
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0 posted 2000-04-15 12:07 PM

Memories come flooding back to implant in my brain, and haunt me,
as I see you walk into the room.

Wanting you to turn around,
wanting you to hold me.

I see a sweet smile, a sad smile, glittering behind your eyes when you glance my way.

Do you think of me?

I wish we hadn't started this game, this game that turned deadly to the heart.

This game that left me with pieces of you.

Hidden smiles of sadness.

Glittering behind eyes.

Hesitant to look my way.

 "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened."
-the words of a friend

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1 posted 2000-04-15 06:17 AM

Unfortunately these things are destined to happen. I hope that everything turns out alright.


 "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement."
Christopher Fry

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2 posted 2000-04-16 07:24 PM

That was a wonderful piece of poetry...I enjoyed reading it!!!!



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Floating gently on a cloud....
3 posted 2000-04-17 07:29 AM

This is a very good poem, I enjoyed it immensely. I hope that you heal with time and find new love again.

Love and hugs,

 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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4 posted 2000-04-17 03:37 PM

I enjoyed this is great.

Keep posting!


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5 posted 2000-04-18 12:17 PM

I know the feeling of this poem, except I cannot say that I was on your side.  We all have to forgive and forget, just be happy that you had the experience and hopefully you learned something from it.  Great writing!  Rachel
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6 posted 2000-04-21 04:37 PM

Great poem!!  I loved it!

 *Love is the only thing that keeps me sane* (Sue Townsend)

since 2000-03-01
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not heaven nor hell so...
7 posted 2000-04-21 05:39 PM

Wow, a great poem, thanks for sharing it with us.
How ever I am starting to wonder if there are any happy poetry in this place, alhtough I suppose that more emotions are expressable in angry poetry.

Keep it up.

Love Always,

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