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0 posted 2000-04-14 02:01 PM

This feeling, fear,
the one you gave me
just a short while ago,
when you said that something
I did bothered you.

Baby, the last thing I want,
is to do anything to mess this up,
but you need to see,
I'm here, too.

I know you care,
but you need to show it.
I try so hard for you,
try things I'd never
usually even think of doing.

I do it all for you,
but the fear that is still there
is there because you
don't show me how you feel,
don't see or acknowledge
just how hard I try for you.

I just want you to see,
that even though
this is a new relationship,
it's important to me.

I don't want to mess it up,
but I don't want to be
the only one of us who tries.
It hurts, and it scares me.

~Kristi Lynn
(Hey all!  Miss me?  First chance for me to post, and it's just something I pulled off the top of my head. )

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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-04-14 03:04 PM

Yeah we missed you, least I know I certainly did! Where have you been? Huh? Huh? I missed your lovely poems and replies!! I hope you will hang around a little longer before you disappear again...and how about an email while you're at it?!? This is a really nice poem, I hope your new relationship becomes stronger and stronger....I wish you all the happiness in it.

Love and hugs,

 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
2 posted 2000-04-14 03:49 PM

Hey Babe!  Okay, I've basically been booted off the computers at school, so now I get in when I have the time.  I'll e-mail you as soon as I can, I promise.  I'm hoping everything works out between Grady and I, too.  Talk to ya later.
Love ya lots,
Kristi Lynn

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since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
3 posted 2000-04-14 05:15 PM

Of COURSE I missed you. Sheeshe, I've been wondering where you've been all this time, haven't heard from you in such a long time it seems.

Well, very nice poem, I do hope that it all works out for you, it would really make me sad if something happend again.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice
From what I've tasted of desire,
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great,
And would suffice.
-Robert Frost

since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
4 posted 2000-04-17 09:21 AM

I've been around, but without the chance to post, since the school won't let me use the comps much anymore.  I hope all works out well, too.  This relationship is different so far, not just because of the way he is, but because of the way the relationship itself is.  Miss ya'll much.
Love ya,
Kristi Lynn

since 2000-02-15
Posts 103
Cecil, Wisconsin USA
5 posted 2000-04-17 07:02 PM

I'm glad that we are at least talking again. I hope all goes well with you and Grady. It's an uninspected turn of events, but I"m happy for you. I"m glad our little time apart was REALLY good to us. Grady is a great guy. SO how is it to kiss him with them vampire teeth   ...eek!!...I'd be scared! LOL! See ya Around hun!

 "If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child

since 2000-03-29
Posts 55

6 posted 2000-04-17 07:59 PM

Fantastic poem you wrote! Fear is somthing we're all scared about.especially me.Keep up your awsome work!
               Heart: n sleeve

since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
7 posted 2000-04-18 03:43 PM

Grady is the greatest- I hope all works out, especially now.  It's getting better between us, but people are telling him things about me that aren't true, and he doesn't know what to believe anymore.  I'm even more afraid of losing him now, since there's a bigger chance.
The teeth are a big turn on, of course.  Being bitten by a vampire was one of my dreams when I was younger.

Love ya'll,
Kristi Lynn

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