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On My Mind |
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Tara Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 76Minnesota |
I fell asleep late last night, with you on my mind. And I dreamt of you. Of your dark brown hair and your barely blue eyes. When I woke, I rolled over and hugged you, But then to my dismay, I realized it was only my pillow. And so I slept again and dreamt again. Only this time you had left me and I cried and cried. I woke again with my head perched on the same pillow I had clutched earlier, only now it was soaked with tears. Oh, how my desire for you had grown over night! How my heart ached without you near me! How I wished we would never be apart again. Yet, here I lay, ready to fall asleep, on this late night, with you on my mind. Once again, alone. |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Beutiful poem, the way you described how you felt for this person I can relate to so much. Sometimes I find myself dreaming of people I love and waking up and wishing they were there. I also have dreams of loosing people I care about and I too wake up in tears. Very beutiful poem. keep posting! smile!  Poe  |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lovely!!! I know what you mean, it happens to me too. Keep posting, I love your poetry! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Nice poem. I like the expression that you used. |
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