|Teen Poetry #2
|darkness be my friend
since 2000-02-12Posts 238
darkness be my friend
your the only one who's near
you taught me how to hate and envy
you taught me how to fear
darkness be my saviour
your grasp on me is firm
you comfort me from reality
you offer obscurity which i yearn
darkness be my master
your existence i hold in awe
you have a majestic power
you have opened up the door
darkness be my enemy
your companionship was not right
you offered me a life
then you showed me the light
"tears are the essence of our souls"
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since 2000-01-25Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
I am glad darkness eventually became the enemy! This is a really good poem.
Love and hugs,
"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is a rainbow of delight."
since 2000-03-02Posts 50
This is a really good poem. It is good to see that you pulled through.
since 2000-04-02Posts 56
I'm happy you found the light, 'cause light allways wins from darkness, luckily
since 2000-02-21Posts 76
Really good poem. It's good you found the light. It's always much happier there! Tara
since 2000-03-31Posts 162
This is an excellent poem. Keep posting!
since 2000-04-13Posts 1462
I enjoy reading your poetry..
Darkness is not always bad, but u must be able to see both the darkness and the light, and live in between.. then u may be enlightened...
An awesome poem.. I love the last few lines.. the darkness betrayed you there..
since 2000-01-15Posts 2034
You had me swirling on this one. Darkness by my friend, but the things it taught you were not good things. The end was good though.
A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.
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