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| Teen Poetry #2 |
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darkness be my friend |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
darkness be my friend your the only one who's near you taught me how to hate and envy you taught me how to fear darkness be my saviour your grasp on me is firm you comfort me from reality you offer obscurity which i yearn darkness be my master your existence i hold in awe you have a majestic power you have opened up the door darkness be my enemy your companionship was not right you offered me a life then you showed me the light "tears are the essence of our souls" |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I am glad darkness eventually became the enemy! This is a really good poem. Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is a rainbow of delight." |
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devil_tongue Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 50 |
This is a really good poem. It is good to see that you pulled through.  |
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natalie Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 56 |
I'm happy you found the light, 'cause light allways wins from darkness, luckily natalie... |
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Tara Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 76Minnesota |
Really good poem. It's good you found the light. It's always much happier there! Tara |
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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
This is an excellent poem. Keep posting! Lindsay |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
I enjoy reading your poetry.. Darkness is not always bad, but u must be able to see both the darkness and the light, and live in between.. then u may be enlightened... An awesome poem.. I love the last few lines.. the darkness betrayed you there.. great writing.. Lynne |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
You had me swirling on this one. Darkness by my friend, but the things it taught you were not good things. The end was good though. Nice writing. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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