|Teen Poetry #2|
|untitled (suggestions please)|
since 2000-01-17Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV
My horoscope was almost always right,
And today’s said I’d lose a love.
I saw you drive by once,
You turned around and came back.
My horoscope had been right,
I’d lost the only person I ever loved.
You drove by again, and stopped,
You asked if I wanted a ride.
Not typical of me, I accepted,
I thought maybe you’d take me away.
You drove me around, until I smiled,
We began to speak, and even planned a date.
My horoscope forgot to mention,
That I would meet someone that would care.
We lived less than a mile apart,
But had never met before that night.
The girls laughed and giggled when I told them,
“It will never work out” is all they said.
That was three years ago,
Now they’re just amazed.
He holds me just right,
Oh, how I love him so.
(if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- pom16pom)
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since 2000-01-25Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
"Love isn't always foretold"....just a suggestion...I'm not so good at these title things myself but anyways.
Love and hugs,
since 1999-09-26Posts 2621
Before I get to a title suggestion, where did you lose a love in this? Alright....title suggestion. "Fortold", "A Date of Fate", "In the Cards". Something along these lines? What do you think?
since 2000-01-15Posts 2034
I like "Lasting Love". I do agree with Marilyn though, sounds like a gain, not a lose.
Nice writing Tamma.
A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.
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