Teen Poetry #2 |
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I love you |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
You are my lucky star you are my happiness without you I wouldn't be the same What can I do to show you my love for you you are my guiding light to true love You've brought everything I need happiness pure love and I thank you You are everything to me you are my world and thats why I love you Your kiss takes my breath away the way you hold me makes me want to cry the way you say I love you gives me shivers You make me want to live another day to feel the love you give and the way you make love You are un-like no other and I've never loved someone as much as you I want to be with you everyday I want to share my life with you I want you to be the one I will marry the one I will grow old with I want to love you forever to wake up to in the morning and the last to see before I sleep and dream of your beautiful face When I lie beside you at night I know this is true love and that I'll only love you that's why I love you |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
someone please reply!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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natalie Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 56 |
wow, I wish I had that feeling of true love, I hope you'll keep it. I like the poem, natalie... |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Love is a precious thing. I am glad you have found it, just never take it for granted. ![]() |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
Well written. I'm glad to see that you have found true love. I hope one day I will know that feeling. Keep up the good work. Isa ![]() |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Thanks guys for your comments, I'm happy you liked the poem. But this is a poem I've written for my future husband whom I havent found yet, but I know is out there because I just have that feeling. I can't wait for it as well, but love requires patience. Thanks again, and people if you read my poems can you please reply because I love hearing from you all. Thanks again!!!!! ![]() ![]() |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Hey Poe, I have replied to stax of your poems and I love reading them. You just have to wait a little cos my time zone is kinda different to yours so my replies would normally come at funny times for you! Be patient, my replies will reach your poems as soon I can get to them!!! Love and hugs, Lizzie ![]() "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is a rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
![]() Love and hugs, Lizzie ![]() |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Again thank you Lizzie for reply so many times to all my poems, and all of you who take the time to read my poems, it means a lot to me. I hope to hear from you all soon. ![]() ![]() |
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