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Teen Poetry #2

How Will I Go On.....

foxy_16
Junior Member

since 1999-11-21

Posts 31
Lake Lillian, MN, USA

0 posted 2000-04-04 01:43 AM

Today I feel lost
Like sitting on the floor
Of a black room
Watching a black and white tv
With the brightness
Turned all the way down.
And I stare into the screen
And think of nothing.
As my mind zones
I think I feel your hands
Upon my naked skin
Telling me you aren’t gone.
But my mind comes back
And your touch retreads….
And I know
That I loved you
And I wonder
How will I go on…..?

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

1 posted 2000-04-04 08:14 AM

This is really good...I enjoyed it

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Lizzie

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

2 posted 2000-04-04 01:19 PM

Nice style with this one, in relation to the black and white color and silence.
Hope these are not your actual feelings.

Jimmy
Junior Member

since 1999-07-17

Posts 42
Oak Grove

3 posted 2000-04-04 11:41 PM

this is exactly how i feel about my ex. please read my poems and tell me if thats kinda how you feel
Jimmy

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