Teen Poetry #2 |
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How Will I Go On..... |
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foxy_16 Junior Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 31Lake Lillian, MN, USA |
Today I feel lost Like sitting on the floor Of a black room Watching a black and white tv With the brightness Turned all the way down. And I stare into the screen And think of nothing. As my mind zones I think I feel your hands Upon my naked skin Telling me you aren’t gone. But my mind comes back And your touch retreads…. And I know That I loved you And I wonder How will I go on…..? |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is really good...I enjoyed it ![]() Love and hugs, Lizzie ![]() |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Nice style with this one, in relation to the black and white color and silence. Hope these are not your actual feelings. |
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Jimmy Junior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 42Oak Grove |
this is exactly how i feel about my ex. please read my poems and tell me if thats kinda how you feel Jimmy |
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