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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Fear of Evil An alarm went off in a house, Not far from where I lay. The dogs started to bark And I began to pray. It was 4:45 am....dark, As I lay frozen in my bed. The only sound my thumping heart As fearful thoughts ran through my head. “What if the men come here? That group of 4 evil men. Men with hearts of stone Who’ve broken in to houses ten.” Why must I live in terror? Is nowhere safe anymore? There are many people at this moment, Out there breaking the law. You can’t escape evil, It lurks in every place. In every town, city and country, There is even plenty in Cyberspace. Will peace and goodwill Ever be offered to one and all? I am scared....really scared, When will it be my turn to fall? As I walk down any road , I could be murdered, abducted or raped. All I would be is another statistic, Victim of the man whose heart in evil is caped. I want to trust this world... But to trust is to invite so much bad. The world could be so beautiful, Instead it is really sad. There is nowhere for me to hide, I am at the mercy of mankind. Whatever I do the shadow of threat Follows me I find. Nowhere to hide... I’ll only be safe when I’ve reached my grave. I’ll be safe when I have died. |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
Alike it I really really like it. Even though it was alittle dark it brought your story to life I liked that hey if you want you can check out one of my old poems called Dying mans prayer I think you will like it For when day turn to night I am still there The fallen angel jytree |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Excellent Poem ESP The world can be a very cruel one but at the same time a great place to be. LoL tracie Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Excellent writing. Unfortunately, your words speak the truth. Its an unsafe world, especially for women. Seems to be getting worse all the time. The law is no deterent it seems. Don't know the answer. Anyway, enjoyed the poem. Stay safe! |
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Thomas Jono Junior Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 25 |
hi, i like your poem, nice work...it's true that these kind of things could happen anytime, anywhere to anyone...but i hope that it wouldn't happen to you cuz you wrote a very nice poem...well, keep on doing nice work... and be careful out there....  |
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