Teen Poetry #2 |
My Angel |
poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
My angel from up above shows me love like none other My dear angel you've shown me the way to my golden destiny where I belong You've carried me through the mud pulled me up when I would fall shown me that you love me that someone really cares for me My dear angel I feel the same I've shown you love too and that I care You are my light to my darkness you make me smile when I frown and thats why I love you You are my best friend and will always be My angel is you no matter what you do no matter where you go I will still love you There are the hard times between us and many to count times we've cried times we've been mad Our lives may not be the best but when I'm with you and when you care for me nothing else matters to me I love you babe you mean the world to me I would protect you no matter what and be there for you no questions asked My angel my life my best friend you know who you are!!! < [This message has been edited by poe_32 (edited 05-09-2000).] |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Beautiful! What a sweet and lovely piece of work here. I'm sure whoever it's written about (if anyone at all) is a very special person. Good job! *Krista Knutson* As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins. ~*Albert Schweitzer*~ |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Thanks for your reply, I'm glad you liked it and yes it is written for a friend. I know they'll read it sometime soon I hope and they'll just know it was for them when they read it. Thanks again!!! Poe |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Beautiful poem....I hope your angel gets to see it really soon!! Love and hugs, Lizzie |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
My angel did read it so it's all good. Thanks for your comments!!! |
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Thomas Jono Junior Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 25 |
I can also see that you write poetry about people you care about(friends)..I liked this poem you wrote, it tells a lot to a girl how much you care about them..and i hope that the girl, or the angel that you are looking for will get a chance to read this cuz she would know how much you cared..thank you for the comment you made with my poem and yes i have a lot of friends whom i care about and wouldn't let them go for anything..keep up the good work, and hear from you soon.. thomas jono |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Thanks for your comment thomas I really appeciate it. PLease people reply when you read my poetry!!!!!!!!! Poe |
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