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Wishes for my friend
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Wishes for my friend |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
My loneliness is my only friend during those long nights sitting in my room wishing for a friend and my wish came true you came along and made my life worth living you made me feel like I was the luckiest person alive that my prayers came true god had givin me a reason to live and I took it for granted and now I've lost that reason for living and I'm lost in all this I don't have a sholder to cry on I don't have a hand to grab when I fall I don't have a friend who cares for me I'm all alone in this darkness all this dispare I'm in and everything I do every song I hear everywhere I go reminds me of you and all I can do is cry cry for the fun we had cry for the laughter cry for the friend I once had and now miss if only I opened my eyes and saw what I was doing what it was going to do to us and what the consequences would be if only I had a second chance I would do everything differently and make this the best friendship but I can't turn back the hands of time I can't make you my friend again I can't bring back all the laughter I can't do that but if I could do something I would do that |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a lovely yet so sad poem. I am your friend....everyone in Passions is too. You can count on us! Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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kayli Junior Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 27 |
hmmm i think i have been the friend that got taken for granted like you say in your poem, i have gone through that, and its tough, btu if my ex-friend ever wrote soemthign that beutiful about me, then i would forgive him, of course my ex-friend is a jerk, so i will nto be gettign as lucky, and yea we are all hear for ya! love always ~kayli |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Thanks for your comments guys, I'm glad you liked the poem and that you understood it. |
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Thomas Jono Junior Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 25 |
your poem brings me back many memories. I feel sad to hear those words you said in your poem. I hope that one day you will find the one you love again, for it will happen if you make it happen..  that was a good poem and very nice work. continue writing good poems like that.. I feel your pain, but you still have a lot of us to care for.. Thomas Jono |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
your guys don't need to worry, this was a poem I wrote a while ago about a old friendship. But thank you all for your concern. Thanks again, Poe  |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
Keep up the good work this is the second one of yours i've read so far and it's good. I think that we all write about things that happen in our lives and that always seems to put out the best poems. I congrat you on a job well done. Isa |
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