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Jessica182
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since 2000-03-20
Posts 15


0 posted 2000-04-02 06:29 PM


You'll never know what pain you brought to me

This love will never be

You took everything completly

Why can't you see?

You hurt me

I know you were set out

To get me to put out

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kayli
Junior Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 27

1 posted 2000-04-02 06:32 PM


woah thats like an awesoem poem, sorry bout the jerk, hope stuff works out

~kayli

kayli
Junior Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 27

2 posted 2000-04-02 06:32 PM


woah thats like an awesoem poem, sorry bout the jerk, hope stuff works out

~kayli

ESP
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
3 posted 2000-04-03 02:23 PM


This is short, sharp poem. I am sorry you are going through this loss. Loss is always painful.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


**Angel**
Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162

4 posted 2000-04-03 04:39 PM


I like this poem. I am sorry for what happened to you. Welcome to passions. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Thank you

Lindsay

Comfrey83
Junior Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 36
Winchester, Mass USA
5 posted 2000-04-03 05:35 PM


hey great job, yea we guys can be real sleazeballs, hope you put him in his place, but great poem, im a big fan of brief poems, that somehow say alot know what i mean?
-Andy

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