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Everlasting Joy |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Gone. It's all gone. The feeling of everlasting misery, The constant flow of guilt, Gone. I thankyou for doing it. You know what you did. You have taken it all away. Thankyou for destroying the misery. You don't know about it yet, But you have made me so elated. I am lost for words around you, Your shy ways makes me melt. I love everything about you. Especially your ability to make me smile. Not everyone can do such a thing, You are an individual in my heart. My head is so clouded it makes me dizzy, But my heart is holding me up. I no longer feel the need to hide, You seem to have made me complete. Something tells me it isnt lust, For my feelings for you are too strong. I don't know whether it is love either though, For that one word is so powerul in its own right. A cloud of happiness has taken over me, I am so high above the world. Your precense in my life has made a difference, I know there's something special here. <!signature--> <font face="Arial, Verdana" size="1" color="#000080"> What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger </font> [This message has been edited by anonymousfemale (edited 04-02-2000).] |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a lovely poem! I hope your happiness lasts a very long time. Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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Comfrey83 Junior Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 36Winchester, Mass USA |
great poem, its really nice when someone lifts you like that. heads up for a fall though! but great poem. Andy |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Nice to see so much happy expression in a poem. So many written in Teen are about losing a love/friend and sadness. Seems as though your looking beyond love and lust. Good idea. Nice poem. |
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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
I like this piece. It is full of happy expressions which is great to see. Thank you Lindsay |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Lovely poem, this is. Well... not of my normal wierd/wired self today, too dang tired, sleep was long in coming last night. Once again, love the poem. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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