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**Angel**
Member

since 2000-03-31

Posts 162

0 posted 2000-03-31 01:52 PM

I see you wandering, with a bright light shining around you.
You intrigue my mind and my soul.
I long to know you, to reach into your thoughts and know exactly what you are thinking.
I want to fill the void in your heart, I want to fulfill your every desire.
If you would only let me.

I see you wandering, with a thunder and lightning storm blasting around you.
You hurt me so, you deserve this storm surging around you.
Once again, how I wish I could reach into your thoughts and twist your insides to hurt like mine did.
I long for you to be empty.
There is nothing for us anymore.

I see you wandering, helpless and alone.
No one to turn to, no one for you to love.
Nothing, that is what you have.
My heart cries out for you.
I wish I could take all of your pain away.
You must help yourself, we all know you can.
The desire is in you, please show me you will be alright.

I see you wandering, doing so much work for you.
You are my strength and I owe so much to you.
I wish I could tell you in different ways how grateful I am for you.
I want to help you, the way you always help me.
I will someday, when you are frail and cry out for it.
I will always be there for you, so please don't forget.

I see you wandering, so quiet with nothing to say.
You seem so alone, so unwanted.
I will give you a chance, you just need not be shy anymore.
You could be so much yet you are so afraid.
I will be accepting, just give me a chance.
You're such a fragile angel.
Just let your wings set you free.

[This message has been edited by **Angel** (edited 03-31-2000).]

Lucius Cade
Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 235
Saskatchewan

1 posted 2000-03-31 02:29 PM

Absolutely incredible. Really I loved it. You definitly will contribute to passions a great deal.

Lucidity is the answer to all problems

**Angel**
Member

since 2000-03-31

Posts 162

2 posted 2000-03-31 02:30 PM

Thank you so much for your support. I think that Passions will be a place I will never forget.

-Lindsay (**Angel**)

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

3 posted 2000-03-31 02:44 PM

I liked the line, "I will be accepting, just give me a chance".
This piece was nicely written. Such good expression.
Good work

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

4 posted 2000-03-31 04:46 PM

Smashing poem, Lindsay!! I look forward to your next poem!!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

heart_on_sleeve
Member

since 2000-03-29

Posts 55

5 posted 2000-03-31 07:29 PM

Very deep and thought poem.Love your work!
Heart_on_sleeve

**Angel**
Member

since 2000-03-31

Posts 162

6 posted 2000-03-31 08:25 PM

Thank you all so much for your support! I absolutely love this place.

Thank you

Lindsay

4eva_at_heart
Member

since 2000-02-12

Posts 238

7 posted 2000-03-31 09:23 PM

this is truly excellent! great post. i think my favourite line..although simple is
"just let your wings set you free"

that really hit the spot.

great work! keep it up
Bec

**Angel**
Member

since 2000-03-31

Posts 162

8 posted 2000-04-01 07:10 AM

I am so thankful for the support!

Thank you so much

Lindsay

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