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Suzanne Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 18Florida |
Do You... Am I giving enough Is it all it should be When water runs dry Are you still here with me? Will you love me through good Stay with me through bad Will you understand me When I'm feeling sad? I need to know Please tell me now Give me a sign Let me know somehow Do you love me Please say you do So that I can say I love you |
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*~*~*butterfly*~*~* New Member
since 2000-03-10
Posts 6Minnesota |
i like this a lot!! it gets right to the point. its a simple poem, but its full of meaning. very well done.... cant wait to read more from you  *kasandra* "When faced with a challenge search for a way, not a way out." -unknown |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Suzanne, i like the expression you use in this poem. It reads well with clarity in meaning. Good effort with the rhyme also. Good work with this one. Welcome to Passions! |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a really nice poem! I like it a whole lot. So simple yet so emotional. Welcome to the family of Passions. I look forward to seeing more of your work very soon!! Love and hugs and welcoming smiles, Lizzie  |
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bulletproof2312 Junior Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 28Beaumont Tx, 77707 |
Your poem is really neat. Easy to read without clutter to bogg it down, I enjoyed reading it *Peace Always* "Here I stand I can do none other"---Luther |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
so simple but so true. great work! Bec |
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