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His Touch |
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Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA 
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Finally I've met someone Who seems within my grasp A possibility...not a fantasy His smile-oh his smile And the way his eyes brighten when he laughs The way he jumped at my touch And held my arm to stop me from making him laugh If only his hand were upon my wrist once more If I close my eyes I can feel his touch And I can breathe in his sweet cologne And I feel as if I'm with him once more But that's only in my mind In reality, he's oblivious to my feelings In fact, we've met only once But I still remember everything vividly The sound of his voice His smile His touch And maybe if I keep hoping and dreaming We'll meet again... [This message has been edited by Singer1981 (edited 03-30-2000).] |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
I think a good title would be "His Touch". Nice expression with this piece. |
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Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA |
Danny- Thanks for the suggestion, and the comment. I was surprised that more people hadn't responded. I was hoping for some criticism...or even someone who would relate to this situation! Anyways...thanks again. ~Sarah |
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heart_on_sleeve Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 55 |
Awsome expression in this poem.In love laughter, dreams, and friendship are the most loving of things to have in love.I felt the same as you when I was in love too.Awsome poem! Heart_on_sleeve |
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