Teen Poetry #2 |
In Love |
Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
I've seen you from a distance, but today, I spoke to you. It was a mere hello, and meant so much to me. My love from afar, now has a voice. Not what I expected, I waited for your laugh. Instead, you hugged me, you even kissed my hair. A single tear fell, now, a single rose. Handed it to me, attached ws a note. I love you is all, he could say to me. Now i just stand here, unable to speak... (if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- pom16pom) [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 03-27-2000).] |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
WoW, this is really beautiful! *Our First Embrace* maybe? Loved it. *There is no destination where we are Please take me somewhere far Far away from this world of mine* (by me) |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
"Speechless" |
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rachella Junior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 39Indiana |
This is beautiful. I'm not sure for a title for this one, but by reading it I thought of a wonderful title for another possible poem-"The Single Tear". Keep up the good work |
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rachella Junior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 39Indiana |
This is good. I'm not sure for a title for this one, but by reading it I thought of a wonderful title for another possible poem-"The Single Tear". Keep up the good work |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
*bump* im just really happy about whats going on, and this poem discribes it perfectly (if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- pom16pom) |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
i have no idea for a title but sweet poem speechless aspect is so true Bec |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
How about " Love and Happiness"? Great poem, a lovely expression of love. |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
*bump*ing this up so ya can compare this one to "just friends" (if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- pom16pom) |
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heart_on_sleeve Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 55 |
Awsome poem!I could have never written a poem as delecate as yours. |
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