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Tamma
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In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-03-22 05:05 PM


I've seen you from a distance,
but today, I spoke to you.

It was a mere hello,
and meant so much to me.

My love from afar,
now has a voice.

Not what I expected,
I waited for your laugh.

Instead, you hugged me,
you even kissed my hair.

A single tear fell,
now, a single rose.

Handed it to me,
attached ws a note.

I love you is all,
he could say to me.

Now i just stand here,
unable to speak...

(if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- pom16pom)




[This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 03-27-2000).]

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LyricFetish
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1 posted 2000-03-22 06:03 PM


WoW, this is really beautiful! *Our First Embrace* maybe? Loved it.  

 *There is no destination where we are
Please take me somewhere far
Far away from this world of mine*
(by me)


Danny Holloway
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2 posted 2000-03-22 06:51 PM


"Speechless"
rachella
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3 posted 2000-03-22 10:18 PM


This is beautiful.  I'm not sure for a title for this one, but by reading it I thought of a wonderful title for another possible poem-"The Single Tear". Keep up the good work
rachella
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4 posted 2000-03-22 10:19 PM


This is good.  I'm not sure for a title for this one, but by reading it I thought of a wonderful title for another possible poem-"The Single Tear". Keep up the good work
Tamma
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In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV
5 posted 2000-03-24 06:50 PM


*bump*   im just really happy about whats going on, and this poem discribes it perfectly


 (if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- pom16pom)

4eva_at_heart
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6 posted 2000-03-25 03:23 AM


i have no idea for a title
but sweet poem

speechless aspect is so true

Bec

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Floating gently on a cloud....
7 posted 2000-03-26 08:06 AM


How about " Love and Happiness"? Great poem, a lovely expression of love.
Tamma
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8 posted 2000-03-29 07:25 PM


*bump*ing this up so ya can compare this one to "just friends"

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9 posted 2000-03-30 12:44 PM


Awsome poem!I could have never written a poem as delecate as yours.
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