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Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-03-22 05:05 PM

I've seen you from a distance,
but today, I spoke to you.

It was a mere hello,
and meant so much to me.

My love from afar,
now has a voice.

Not what I expected,
I waited for your laugh.

Instead, you hugged me,
you even kissed my hair.

A single tear fell,
now, a single rose.

Handed it to me,
attached ws a note.

I love you is all,
he could say to me.

Now i just stand here,
unable to speak...

(if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- pom16pom)

[This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 03-27-2000).]

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

1 posted 2000-03-22 06:03 PM

WoW, this is really beautiful! *Our First Embrace* maybe? Loved it.

*There is no destination where we are
Please take me somewhere far
Far away from this world of mine*
(by me)

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

2 posted 2000-03-22 06:51 PM

"Speechless"

rachella
Junior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 39
Indiana

3 posted 2000-03-22 10:18 PM

This is beautiful. I'm not sure for a title for this one, but by reading it I thought of a wonderful title for another possible poem-"The Single Tear". Keep up the good work

rachella
Junior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 39
Indiana

4 posted 2000-03-22 10:19 PM

This is good. I'm not sure for a title for this one, but by reading it I thought of a wonderful title for another possible poem-"The Single Tear". Keep up the good work

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

5 posted 2000-03-24 06:50 PM

*bump*

im just really happy about whats going on, and this poem discribes it perfectly

(if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- pom16pom)

4eva_at_heart
Member

since 2000-02-12

Posts 238

6 posted 2000-03-25 03:23 AM

i have no idea for a title

but sweet poem

speechless aspect is so true

Bec

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

7 posted 2000-03-26 08:06 AM

How about " Love and Happiness"? Great poem, a lovely expression of love.

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

8 posted 2000-03-29 07:25 PM

*bump*ing this up so ya can compare this one to "just friends"

(if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- pom16pom)

heart_on_sleeve
Member

since 2000-03-29

Posts 55

9 posted 2000-03-30 12:44 PM

Awsome poem!I could have never written a poem as delecate as yours.

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