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since 2000-03-26
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Imlay City, Mi

0 posted 2000-03-28 07:02 PM

Be greatful for your mother.
There will be no other.

You could have had a mother like me.
It wasn't good you see.

Your mother could have told you
she hated you since the day you were two.

Your mother could have beat your ass
becasue you were a late to your 2nd hour class.

Your mother could have made you hold her hair
when she was pucking in the cool night air.

Your mother could have been a slut.
Your mother could have treated you like a mut.

Your mother may have been a bitch
but that is better than a Bitchy witch.

My life was hard but it is better now. It is all just something to joke about now! Be greatful for your mother!!!!! If your not, I'll be glad to trade.

© Copyright 2000 Melinda Hays - All Rights Reserved
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251
1 posted 2000-03-28 07:42 PM

thank you for that -- sometimes i make the mistake of taking my mother for granted.  i hope you wil find someone in your life who will be like a mother to you -- i know it's not the same as the real thing, but still it will be someone in your life...wonderful poem.
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
2 posted 2000-03-28 08:16 PM

I'm sorry your mother wasn't good to you, a mom is very important. Nice poem. Stick around this forum, it's a cool place to hang.

 *There is no destination where we are
Please take me somewhere far
Far away from this world of mine*
(by me)

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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
3 posted 2000-03-29 05:42 AM

Mothers are the most important poeple in our lives, they help shape us and guide us to be the best human beings we can be.
So sorry to here you had a rough time with your mum and someday she will realise what she did and live to regret it very much, when she is left all alone in the world.
I hope you are doing okay and if you ever need someone to talk to feel free to e-mail me
LoL tracie

 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
4 posted 2000-03-29 06:49 AM

Mothers are very important. I am sorry you have had a hard time with yours. Very nice poem!
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