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ezt Junior Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 19 |
I'm sitting here holding your picture listening to a wind... ...of change On the summer night I may survive listening to the wind when you sometimes saw me did you ever think that we could live so close like friends... A future in the air I can feel it everywhere blowing with wind of change... Take me to the magic of the moment on the glory night where these tears will just be a memory Walking down the street different memories fly around I feel the pain the pain of love looking after you trying to hear your sound Take me to the magic of the moment on the glory night where the sunrise of tomorrow just will be a memorial I don't know why but It's time to say Goodbye You've changed you so much in the past I know I made some mistakes but I can't understand what? anyway it's time to say Goodbye if I may survive I'm sitting here thinking about you listening to a wind a wind of change Walking down the street distant memories burried in a box of sorrow forever.... can't change anything just causing the pain When I look upon the sky I see your face when I close my eyes I see your face When I say your name I feel the same I see the same... ...a pretty girl I see the mistakes I made but I can't do anything just knowing that I've been a fool! I'm sitting here holding your picture listening to a wind... ...of change On the summer night This soldier may survive listening to the wind when you sometimes saw me did you ever think that we could live so close like friends... A future in the air I can feel it everywhere blowing with wind of change... Take me to the magic of the moment on the glory night where I sacrifie my tomorrow to your today I let your picture fly away I don't need it anymore cause I got the picture I need I got a picture of you in my heart so I'll never let you away you'll never be lost a paper don't makes the matter the true comes from the heart The wind of change come no straight so shake your mind a change is needed to make me feel better Take me to the magic of the moment on the glory night where I'll hold you and kiss you goodnight I'm flying in a wind... a wind of change... LOVE IS SUCH A BEAUTIFUL THING... |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
WOW this is the most beautiful poem!!! It is so full of so many different emotions. This poem totally made my heart cry. |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
I like this~ a beautiful poem. Good job. ~Kristi Lynn |
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Mellon Collie Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 49united states of america |
dear ezt, this is a lovely piece. i like the repeated lines (chorus) best and i also am fond of the "take me to the magic..." lines  very good job. the object of this poem is blessed indeed to have such talent directed towards him/her.sincerely, the beautiful freak |
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ezt Junior Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 19 |
Hello My name is Mumba, and I'm a friend of Brian. I wrote this poem. I'm not so active like Brian writting poems, but I wrote this, cuz I need it. I want to know that "is this poem good enough to send to a beloved girl?" I mean, I want her, but she already have a boyfriend, so I wrote this poem for her. And I hope I'll get her back. Does this poem make feelings such a way, that it will be possible to get her back? If not, so can anybody e-mail me some good poems, that I can use. I mean some poems, which may cause "that she'll ..." you know what I mean. I'm very thankfull to all of you, who liked this poem. It's my first real poem. so... I'll be very pleased getting some poems, which I need, cuz I don't think I'm as good as you guys. My e-mail adr.: [email protected] |
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Mellon Collie Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 49united states of america |
dear ezt, well, it's just my opinion, but i suggest that you hold on to this poem until you find out whether the object of your affection's current relationship is working out. confusing her about love wont do anything but bring her undue stress and heartache over who she wants to be with. if you two were meant to be, then i believe that her current relationship will not succeed and then when she is single again you should give her the poem and tell her how you feel. just my thoughts. sincerely, the beautiful freak |
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shaheen Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 16Denmark |
Hi' Can nobody help me? I'm asking about something, but nobody answer, except from Mellon Collie. I'm very thankfull to her. I thought there will be many relpies, but NOT! Please send me some comments! Thank You! ciao! --- Mumba -ezt- "Their is an island of opprtunities in middle of every difficulty!" |
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heart_on_sleeve Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 55 |
Touching poem you wrote.I think a tear rolled into my eye while reading your touching poem.I loved this poem.  Heart_on_sleeve |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Stunning piece here! I think that it's worth a try to give this to her, to let your feelings be known. Then you are being both truthful to her and to you. I wish you the best of luck. *Krista Knutson* As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins. ~*Albert Schweitzer*~ |
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shaheen Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 16Denmark |
hi' sorry guys, but I sent this poem at top again, because somebody will think "which wind of change is he talking about?". Therefor did I send this one up again. sorry...don't hope it makes the matter... ciao! your sincerly Nighthawk -mumba- "Their is an island of opprtunities in middle of every difficulty!" |
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