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0 posted 2000-03-26 09:30 PM

Earlier this year I was going through a serious depression. I lost two dear friends in a car acident and I had no desire to go on.For those of you that are reading this and are already depressed let me tell you I have been there and suicide is not the choice... it is three months later from the time I alomost killed myself and my life has never been better please doon't give up.Anyhow, In that time a wrote this poem:

Thoughts are going through my head
to end the life I have lead.

I am so frightened and so alone.
I am ready to go home.

School is so hard and my life is a mess.
I wanted to be so much, But I am much less.

A guy a like is playing hard to get
I am going to have a fit.

Nothing dulls my pain,
It just flows through every vain.

I wish I could just got to bed,
and lay there dead.

This is how I want to be,
for the rest of eternity.

They will bury me six feet deep.
I will then just be a dirty heap.

Magets will crawl into my eyes,
and eat through my thighs.

Eventually they will forget I exsist.
That would be bliss.

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1 posted 2000-03-27 07:34 AM

I am so glad that you didn't kill yourself! I am so glad your life is getting better. I don't know you but reading your poetry has made me worry about you. I hope your life coniues to get better and better.
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