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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
Cracked and broken pieces All strewn about the floor. No amount of glue or stitch Will patch this aching sore. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Interesting...Is this in relation to a physical or mental sore? ~AF~ |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
hhhhmmmm....i'd also like to know whether this is in relation to a physical or mental sore  good job Bec |
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emptyness Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 95mobile,Ala,USA |
it is a mental scare isnt it i know it is because i have felt the same way before i hope you feel better but a good poem anyway "scribere iussit amor" love commanded me to write |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
All these broken pieces, a mess that you created. I wish right now, I was heavily sedated. (Sorry, I had to add, since I know the feeling of hurt all too well right now.) Good job. ~Kristi Lynn |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is emotional right? It is very powerful. I know what hurt feels like, I have felt it many times, you will find happiness again. Just believe in yourself. Keep posting!! |
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