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| Teen Poetry #2 |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
We have danced the dance Of love and life. I wouldn't change a single thing Not even all the strife. Last night I wondered Where we would have been, If you had never asked me And we were still 'just friends.' But then I couldn't miss The good times that we shared, Or every single kiss That showed how much we cared. So in the end it's worth it To suffer through this trial. I wouldn't change a single thing Every bit has been worth while. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is a sweet poem. Is it relevant to someone in your life? (Just curious  )I wouldn't be able to help you with a title because I suck at these things myself...but don't worry, someone here will think of a good title for you Good work ~AF~ |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
all my support on this one!! all the happy times make up for the bumpy areas in life just a suggestion coz i kinda suck at titles... 'a life treasured' i dunno....you can come up with one surely lolBec |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
"Finding Each Other" Nice poem. |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
"Every Single Kiss" Great poem so far. Hope you find a suitable title. Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Great poem. A title? Erm I'm not sure. Maybe "A Life I would never change". I'm sure you will find the perfect title for your poem. I agree with what you said about the good things make up for the bad things. I feel the same way. Looking forward to your next post! |
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emptyness Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 95mobile,Ala,USA |
nice job pharon how about its worth it just a suggestion keep up the good work "scribere iussit amor" love commanded me to write |
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April Resi Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 119Alabama |
Very sweet poem. Funny how the good times always out-weigh the bad. I completely understand how you feel, and hope it all works out for you. April |
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MelBear Junior Member
since 2000-03-26
Posts 29Imlay City, Mi |
Very nice. how about "Just friends" for a title. Anyhow keep up the good writing |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Cute poem. A title- ummmmm, good question. I'm not very good at the title thing. Sorry. But I like your poem. ~Kristi Lynn |
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