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pharon
Member

since 1999-11-13

Posts 251
alabama

0 posted 2000-03-24 07:25 PM

We have danced the dance
Of love and life.
I wouldn't change a single thing
Not even all the strife.

Last night I wondered
Where we would have been,
If you had never asked me
And we were still 'just friends.'

But then I couldn't miss
The good times that we shared,
Or every single kiss
That showed how much we cared.

So in the end it's worth it
To suffer through this trial.
I wouldn't change a single thing
Every bit has been worth while.

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

1 posted 2000-03-24 08:55 PM

This is a sweet poem. Is it relevant to someone in your life? (Just curious

)

I wouldn't be able to help you with a title because I suck at these things myself...but don't worry, someone here will think of a good title for you

Good work

~AF~

4eva_at_heart
Member

since 2000-02-12

Posts 238

2 posted 2000-03-25 03:19 AM

all my support on this one!! all the happy times make up for the bumpy areas in life

just a suggestion coz i kinda suck at titles... 'a life treasured'
i dunno....you can come up with one surely

lol

Bec

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

3 posted 2000-03-25 11:43 AM

"Finding Each Other"
Nice poem.

Lucius Cade
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since 2000-03-23

Posts 235
Saskatchewan

4 posted 2000-03-26 03:41 AM

"Every Single Kiss"
Great poem so far. Hope you find a suitable title.

Lucidity is the answer to all problems

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

5 posted 2000-03-26 06:59 AM

Great poem. A title? Erm I'm not sure. Maybe "A Life I would never change". I'm sure you will find the perfect title for your poem. I agree with what you said about the good things make up for the bad things. I feel the same way. Looking forward to your next post!

emptyness
Member

since 2000-03-09

Posts 95
mobile,Ala,USA

6 posted 2000-03-26 12:49 PM

nice job pharon how about its worth it
just a suggestion keep up the good work

"scribere iussit amor" love commanded me to write

April Resi
Member

since 1999-10-18

Posts 119
Alabama

7 posted 2000-03-27 12:06 PM

Very sweet poem. Funny how the good times always out-weigh the bad. I completely understand how you feel, and hope it all works out for you.
April

MelBear
Junior Member

since 2000-03-26

Posts 29
Imlay City, Mi

8 posted 2000-03-27 05:23 PM

Very nice. how about "Just friends" for a title. Anyhow keep up the good writing

angel6917
Member

since 2000-01-14

Posts 478
WI

9 posted 2000-03-28 10:02 AM

Cute poem. A title- ummmmm, good question. I'm not very good at the title thing. Sorry. But I like your poem.
~Kristi Lynn

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