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Teen Poetry #2

strike a match

pharon
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since 1999-11-13

Posts 251
alabama

0 posted 2000-03-24 07:13 PM

No candle burns forever,
No light can ever last.

So, when the flame turns 'bout
And the light burns out,

I will strike a match

And light another candle,
Skrew in a new bulb.

All this done tenderly
And with everlasting love.

4eva_at_heart
Member

since 2000-02-12

Posts 238

1 posted 2000-03-25 03:20 AM

i like the comparison you used

very clever

keep up the posts

Bec

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

2 posted 2000-03-26 08:14 AM

Neat poem. Keep posting em!

emptyness
Member

since 2000-03-09

Posts 95
mobile,Ala,USA

3 posted 2000-03-26 12:46 PM

nice the story of ongoing life and not letting anything stop you good job

"scribere iussit amor" love commanded me to write

April Resi
Member

since 1999-10-18

Posts 119
Alabama

4 posted 2000-03-27 12:03 PM

Oh, I loved this poem! It was so simple, yet everything that needed to be said was said. I really liked this one, and hope to see more poetry from you...
April

angel6917
Member

since 2000-01-14

Posts 478
WI

5 posted 2000-03-28 10:08 AM

I like this poem. It's cute, and definately original. Keep up the good work.
~Kristi Lynn

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