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I Never Wanted It That Way
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I Never Wanted It That Way |
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Ashiraladoni Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 52Duluth, MN, USA |
I never wanted it that way. I never wanted the cold shoulder. I never wanted the silence. All I asked was for no touching. I didn't ask for this. I wanted my space, and the chance to think things through. Had I made the right decision by ending it all with you? And each day the answer becomes a little bit clearer. I made the right decision, so did we. In the beginning it was our decision to be this way. But in the end, one of us was hurt more. Whether it was me or you, we may never know. I never wanted it that way. I never wanted the cold shoulder. I never wanted the silence. All I asked for was no touching. But in the end, I got it anyways. " To be free, or to be enslaved, that is the question." |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Interesting poem. I liked the way you started and ended the poem. Nice style. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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