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Teen Poetry #2
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Jessica182
Junior Member
since 2000-03-20
Posts 15
0 posted 2000-03-22 01:54 AM

From a promise to a secret
I know I can trust you
for you
are a friend so little people really get to know
the gentle soft spirit
with such a warm glow
it sends goosebumps all the way down to my toes
so this is how my story goes...
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DragonFang
Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
1 posted 2000-03-22 08:11 AM

short and sweet, I like it. Good job.
I'd love to say more, but I just got up...

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.


angel6917
Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
2 posted 2000-03-22 09:45 AM

I like it-
Keep up the good work.
~Kristi Lynn
Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
3 posted 2000-03-22 11:16 AM

Nice poem, welcome to Passions!
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