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The Remnant Of My Blemished Heart
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The Remnant Of My Blemished Heart |
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Jessica182 Junior Member
since 2000-03-20
Posts 15 |
The Remnant Of My Blemished Heart The anger inside me burns It's magnitude turns As it consumes my spirit And attemps to get The remnant of my blemished heart How can I even commence to start What you did I can't unlearn The reflection of your soul makes my stomach turn For you decayed my soul Was this your indisposed goal? To obtruct me To make yourself the only one happy To cause me pain And allow you have something to gain I will neglect every memory And bestow you no glory For I exceed your knowledge of life Your brightness is like a child with a knife |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
this is excellent!!! how long have you been writing?? coz this is great!  Welcome to Passions! wow.......i like your poem heaps!! Bec |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Hey and welcome to Passions! You're a very good writer and I can't wait to read more of your work! Keep on writing! Loves may seem forgotten, but the true will once shine through. |
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Jessica182 Junior Member
since 2000-03-20
Posts 15 |
I am a 14/f/ca and i have been writing for a couple years I have a webpage where you can look at some of my poems http://www.wink182.8m.com Thanks, Jessica :P |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Hey, great poem, very nice indeed. Welcome to passions, hope to see more from you. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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