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LyricFetish
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina

0 posted 2000-03-18 02:33 PM


Did you know your words
Are like scripture upon my heart?

You write volumes
Every time you speak to me

Mated to your voice,
This sacred text
Produces the most beautiful music

An awe-inspiring sound that waves,
But never breaks in the upper atmospheres
Of my emotional bliss

There in the far reaches of my inner sanctum
I hold you locked in fragments
As a vault
Possessing all the fortunes of this earthly world

Only fragments,
Because I fear and crave instinctively
The totality of your mind, body and soul

Contemplating all of you at once
Sends my heart racing into marathon spirit,
My eyes fluttering in fragile awakening
To this new dawn

As if reborn,
I live my life with embryonic eyes
Gazing with love upon your face
Where I recognize my future

Your arms,
My cradle of affection,
Hold me in the splender of your love

Precious, honest,
All-encompassing passion
You make love to me with every breath
Your deepest intimacies stir inside me
And I know I am home at last

 


[This message has been edited by LyricFetish (edited 03-18-2000).]

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Oo0ostephanio0oO
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since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
1 posted 2000-03-18 04:29 PM


This was a very well-written piece in my eyes. Very beautiful, too. Keep up the good work!   I might take you on on your offer one of these days... <thanks>  

 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."


LyricFetish
Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
2 posted 2000-03-18 10:53 PM


Thank you very much! I posted this one because I realized I've never posted a 'happy' poem in here. They've always been the depressing ones that I seem to write in over-abundance. I DO actually feel content at times, so, I just thought I'd share this with ya'll. Thanx again.

 *There is no destination where we are
Please take me somewhere far
Far away from this world of mine*
(by me)


LyricFetish
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
3 posted 2000-03-20 08:05 PM


Umm, I was hoping for a little more response on this one.
Crystalina123
Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228

4 posted 2000-03-21 04:43 PM


It's always good to have someone to go to and be "home at last" few of us have that person though many of us wish for it! Keep up the good work!

-- Crystal

 "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive.
Because when you love someone you control their version
of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them
autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact,
not their true situation at all."

It's not the angry words that break the heart, it's the silence.

Someone said that true love is like a ghost -- often spoke of but never seen.
I've seen both and yet in my darkest hours, tend to believe that neither exits.

LyricFetish
Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
5 posted 2000-03-22 06:07 PM


Thank you Crystal, ironically enough, this poem wasn't inspired by an actual person, just the idea of one, the guy I hope to find some day. Once I've met him, I'm sure I'll want to say all these things! <I know, I'm pathetic>

Meredith

 *There is no destination where we are
Please take me somewhere far
Far away from this world of mine*
(by me)


Dean
Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120
Canada
6 posted 2000-03-22 10:03 PM


What can I say Great as ushual you never disapoint me!! keep uo the good work girl!

 "Live to love or why live at all"
Deano :)


Dean
Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120
Canada
7 posted 2000-03-22 10:04 PM


What can I say Great as ushual you never disapoint me!! keep up the good work girl!

 "Live to love or why live at all"
Deano :)


Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
8 posted 2000-03-23 03:59 PM


This is very good free verse.  Some of the better poetry I have seen posted.
I like the way you wrapped up the ending.
Nice work.

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

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