| How to Join | Member's Area | Private Library | Search | Sanctuary | Login | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Main Forums | Discussion | Tech Talk | Mature Content | Archives |
A home without a wall, |
|
|
||||||
| How to Join | Member's Area | Private Library | Search | Sanctuary | Login | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Main Forums | Discussion | Tech Talk | Mature Content | Archives |
A home without a wall, |
|
|
|
||||||
| Teen Poetry #2 |
|
Music From Your Soul |
|
|
LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina 
|
Did you know your words Are like scripture upon my heart? You write volumes Every time you speak to me Mated to your voice, This sacred text Produces the most beautiful music An awe-inspiring sound that waves, But never breaks in the upper atmospheres Of my emotional bliss There in the far reaches of my inner sanctum I hold you locked in fragments As a vault Possessing all the fortunes of this earthly world Only fragments, Because I fear and crave instinctively The totality of your mind, body and soul Contemplating all of you at once Sends my heart racing into marathon spirit, My eyes fluttering in fragile awakening To this new dawn As if reborn, I live my life with embryonic eyes Gazing with love upon your face Where I recognize my future Your arms, My cradle of affection, Hold me in the splender of your love Precious, honest, All-encompassing passion You make love to me with every breath Your deepest intimacies stir inside me And I know I am home at last [This message has been edited by LyricFetish (edited 03-18-2000).] |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Meredith - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
This was a very well-written piece in my eyes. Very beautiful, too. Keep up the good work!  I might take you on on your offer one of these days... <thanks> (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
||
|
LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Thank you very much! I posted this one because I realized I've never posted a 'happy' poem in here. They've always been the depressing ones that I seem to write in over-abundance. I DO actually feel content at times, so, I just thought I'd share this with ya'll. Thanx again. *There is no destination where we are Please take me somewhere far Far away from this world of mine* (by me) |
||
|
LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Umm, I was hoping for a little more response on this one. |
||
|
Crystalina123 Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228 |
It's always good to have someone to go to and be "home at last" few of us have that person though many of us wish for it! Keep up the good work! -- Crystal "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive. Because when you love someone you control their version of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact, not their true situation at all." It's not the angry words that break the heart, it's the silence. Someone said that true love is like a ghost -- often spoke of but never seen. I've seen both and yet in my darkest hours, tend to believe that neither exits. |
||
|
LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Thank you Crystal, ironically enough, this poem wasn't inspired by an actual person, just the idea of one, the guy I hope to find some day. Once I've met him, I'm sure I'll want to say all these things! <I know, I'm pathetic> Meredith *There is no destination where we are Please take me somewhere far Far away from this world of mine* (by me) |
||
|
Dean Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120Canada |
What can I say Great as ushual you never disapoint me!! keep uo the good work girl! "Live to love or why live at all" Deano :) |
||
|
Dean Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120Canada |
What can I say Great as ushual you never disapoint me!! keep up the good work girl! "Live to love or why live at all" Deano :) |
||
|
Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
This is very good free verse. Some of the better poetry I have seen posted. I like the way you wrapped up the ending. Nice work. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
