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Teen Poetry #2

just because i love u

eagle
Junior Member

since 1999-10-20

Posts 39
singapore

0 posted 1999-10-27 09:22 AM

Just because i love u

I won't die for u
At least not to prove that my love is true
but just because i love you

I won't cry for u
At least not because i've been hurt by u
but just becaus i love you

I won't say goodbye
At least not for everything we've been through
but just because i love you

I won't break your heart
Not unless the sun suddenly turns blue
but just because i love you

[This message has been edited by eagle (edited 10-30-1999).]

starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

1 posted 1999-10-27 09:49 AM

Wow! i really liked this poem...

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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 1999-10-29 10:51 PM

This is very good. I would suggest Capitalization though. It would enhance this lovely poem.

eagle
Junior Member

since 1999-10-20

Posts 39
singapore

3 posted 1999-10-30 05:58 AM

Thanks for the advice...

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