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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
I am myself, not trying to be like everyone else, just trying to be who I am, just trying to be me. I care about others, and I can say that no matter what's been done, I can still care, and still try my best to help anyone out. I am a person who tries my best not to burden anyone with all my problems- I realize that everyone has their own, and I try my best to help them with theirs. I am sensitive, whether people believe it or not. I am easily hurt, and I hide it until I'm all alone, But I wish more people were kind. I admit to anyone that I can be strange, but part of that is what makes me who I am, the little quirky things I do are what make me unique. I just wish people could see who I am, and not look at the clothes I wear or the food I eat. I want people to see what's on the inside, and see me for who I am. ~Kristi Lynn |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Very nice poem Kristi. Hehehe, seventh period is cool, no class *smiles*. I'm sure you're all that you said in your poem, but I say your a friend.  Well, this was a nice deversion, back to research."Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
Very well put poem. I am in your position, alot. Everyone thinks I'm a pushover because I am very defensive of myself. It's only because many people have hurt me in the past and that is the only way I know how to deal with certain things. I have a hard time letting people in because I don't trust very many people, which also happens to be involved with what people have done to me in the past. Although those who have been let in know me well, and how sweet I am. It really bothers me that people think I am a b...h just become I am a very sesntive person. (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
good job with this one i can TOTALLY relate to this. just keep being you and never let anyone discourage you!! talk to you later. bye-- pharon -- |
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emptyness Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 95mobile,Ala,USA |
i think that almost anyone can see themselfs in this poem i know that i resemble a lot of what you said especially in the third para. keep it up angel "scribere iussit amor" love commanded me to write |
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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
Angel that is a good poem, i wish everyone looked around at everyone that way because the world would be a better place!! keep on posting !! Dana |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
i wish everyone could have this outlook on life...i agree with dazed that the world would be a much better place. i can relate to this poem heaps good job keep up the posts Bec |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Hey all! Thanks much for the sweet replies! DragonFang~ Not gonna be here until Friday, huh? I guess we here are irresistable, aren't we? Anyhoo, thank you for your sweet comment, it means soooooooo much. Stephani~ I completely agree with what you had to say. People seem to think the same of me, but as I said, I don't care, because what they think isn't who I am. I am who I am, and I am who I made myself. That's all there is to it, and if someone doesn't like it, tough. Pharon~ I never let anyone discourage me. If someone says something, I just do something that proves that I'm not like everyone else, but the way I want to be. Emptyness~ The third paragraph is the one I wish the most I could be different in, just because I've had so many problems, and I'm not the kind of person to ask for help until it's in dire need. I just can't do that to people... Dana and Bec~ I wish people could look at life more in the way I do, too, instead of everyone trying to be cool, or to fit in with everyone else. It just doesn't work that way.... ~Kristi Lynn |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Be yourself, don't change for anyone. We're not supposed to look alike or act alike. It's in the ways that we're different that make us and the world a special place. People who would change you are insecure and afraid of your uniqueness. (opinion) I'm rambling so I'll stop. I like your expression in this piece. |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Kristi, if you want to know why I'm still here mail me and I'll be glad to explain. Most of it though it I'm just slacking off again. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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JennyeMeshan Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 103Cecil, Wisconsin USA |
OK kristi! Me know how you are! LOL!!! I liek the poem a lot...you betta keep writing and make your best bud JennyeMeshan proud ok? (like a mother) "If thou can wait then thou shall stay" -Destiny's Child |
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JennyeMeshan Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 103Cecil, Wisconsin USA |
OK kristi! Me know how you are! LOL!!! I liek the poem a lot...you betta keep writing and make your best bud JennyeMeshan proud ok? (like a mother) ~JeNnYeMeShAN~   cool man!"If thou can wait then thou shall stay" -Destiny's Child |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Danny~ Of course we're supposed to be different- it's the way God made us. I agree with what you say about people being afraid of uniqueness. Thank you for your sweet reply. DragonFang~ I can't mail you until about 1:30-2:00 when I'm outside of school, but I will... I'm glad you're here to keep me company. ~Kristi Lynn |
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