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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
I was with him much to long 7 years of my life, Where did we go wrong?? I thought we would be forever never be appart a special place is where I hold him always in my heart.. We had a love like no other and made a great pair.. Tell me how could it be?? It just isnt fair! We have 2 babies beautiful as can be! one looks like him the other looks like me. We knew we couldnt hang on, no not any longer.. Those feelings never gone and now we're getting stronger Life with out him I thought I could'nt bare to let him go I think I felt my heart tare... He's a good man this I'll really miss. I'm sending this out to you chuck and its sealed with a kiss... I'll always love you!! this poem is about my x-boyfriend and I. Its dedicated to him |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
I like this poem, but it is so sad. I understand where a good love might go wrong, but sometimes 'tis best that way. Keep him forever in your heart, but move on, as well. That's the best advice I can give, and if you ever want to talk, e-mail me, okay? ~Kristi Lynn |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
I don't really know what to say. It is a very nice poem. Keep up the good work Dazed. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
Sweet, but oh so sad hon. I hope you are doing alright. I understand that this is a very difficult time, especially with children involved. Try to keep your chin up though. I have been through alot and I also have to remind myself of this everyday...*Never Say Forever Because Forever Never Happens* (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
Thanx again Oo, and DragonFang!! Thanx Kristi and everyone that takes the time to reply!!! Dana |
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NewbiePoetGuy Junior Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 13Thousand Oaks, Ca, USA |
i feel so bad for you, but i thought i was the only one, nah not really but it feels that way sometimes i just ended a very powerful relationship, the most powerful ive ever been in but i hope you are ok and the poem was very good, best of luck Larry |
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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
Thanx newbiepoetguy I appreciate your concern and to everyone else that reads this its sad but happy too!! I love him and always will but I have to love him enough to let him go be who he wants to be also.. |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
oh...this is such a sad poem because it is so real  love...the amount of times i have typed that word into this forum...is forever...perhaps it doesn't mean you will be together forever, but if you have truly loved that person will never leave your heart, and i am sure Chuck holds you dear and forever will  Bec |
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