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since 2000-03-13
Posts 119

0 posted 2000-03-14 03:39 PM

I was with him much to long
7 years of my life,
Where did we go wrong??

I thought we would be forever
never be appart
a special place is where I hold him
always in my heart..

We had a love like no other
and made a great pair..
Tell me how could it be??
It just isnt fair!

We have 2 babies
beautiful as can be!
one looks like him
the other looks like me.

We knew we couldnt hang on,
no not any longer..
Those feelings never gone
and now we're getting stronger

Life with out him I thought
I could'nt bare
to let him go I think I felt my heart

He's a good man this I'll really miss.
I'm sending this out to you chuck and its sealed with a kiss...

I'll always love you!!
this poem is about my x-boyfriend and I.
Its dedicated to him

© Copyright 2000 Dana Wheeler - All Rights Reserved
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
1 posted 2000-03-14 03:53 PM

I like this poem,
but it is so sad.
I understand where a
good love might go wrong,
but sometimes 'tis best that way.
Keep him forever in your heart,
but move on, as well.
That's the best advice I can give,
and if you ever want to talk,
e-mail me, okay?
~Kristi Lynn

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since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
2 posted 2000-03-14 04:47 PM

I don't really know what to say. It is a very nice poem. Keep up the good work Dazed.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.

since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
3 posted 2000-03-14 04:59 PM

Sweet, but oh so sad hon. I hope you are doing alright. I understand that this is a very difficult time, especially with children involved. Try to keep your chin up though.

I have been through alot and I also have to remind myself of this everyday...*Never Say Forever Because Forever Never Happens*

"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

since 2000-03-13
Posts 119
4 posted 2000-03-14 08:23 PM

Thanx again Oo, and DragonFang!! Thanx Kristi and everyone that takes the time to reply!!!

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since 2000-03-14
Posts 13
Thousand Oaks, Ca, USA
5 posted 2000-03-14 08:29 PM

i feel so bad for you, but i thought i was the only one, nah not really but it feels that way sometimes i just ended a very powerful relationship, the most powerful ive ever been in but i hope you are ok and the poem was very good, best of luck

since 2000-03-13
Posts 119
6 posted 2000-03-15 12:43 PM

Thanx newbiepoetguy
I appreciate your concern and to everyone else that reads this its sad but happy too!!
I love him and always will but I have to love him enough to let him go be who he wants to be also..

since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

7 posted 2000-03-15 03:00 AM

oh...this is such a sad poem because it is so real

love...the amount of times i have typed that word into this forever...perhaps it doesn't mean you will be together forever, but if you have truly loved that person will never leave your heart, and i am sure Chuck holds you dear and forever will


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