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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
You have no idea what those three little words you told me meant to me. I love you, you've made me happier than I've been in the longest time. I've never felt so alive with someone before. And never had so much fun being myself, without worrying about what you might think or say. You've made me feel like a princess, like someone important in your life, just by telling me those three little words, by telling me "I Love You." ~Kristi Lynn for Nate |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
good job I can tell it was from your heart just tap into those feelings inside and write what you feel and let the potry flow The Phamtom Poet Michael Jay Vaughn |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Great job! I do have one word of advice. "I LOVE YOU" is not three little words. Most teens throw that phrase around like it means nothing. Be careful... |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Thank you for your replies. Jytree~ thank you very much. I always write what I feel. Jer~ I know they aren't 3 little words, but I hope to god he means them. I'll figure everything out in time. It's good to see you here again. ~Kristi Lynn |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Very beutiful poem Kristi. I like it a lot, good job. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
this is great!!! i know exactly how you feel! isn't life grand? isn't love and a sense of feeling wanted even better?!?! Jer: you are right...'i love you' shouldn't be viewed upon as just words, but on the contrary, some 'teens' respect the meaning and importance of that, and i know from experience that others have thought me foolish for using them, but has there ever really been a a consent age for finding that special person? some of us are just fortunate to to find these people at a young age  overall...what a wonderful poem and i wish you all the best with your man  Bec |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Thank you sooooo much for liking my poem, DragonFang. It's so nice to know that you like the emotion I put into my poetry... Bec~ Oh, I love the feeling of being loved and wanted and important. There's so much of a good feeling there. I agree also that some people may think you foolish for using the words "I love you," but with me, I won't say it unless I mean it... I realize that people may think I'm too young, but there isn't a set age that you can fall in love at. It'll happen at any time, and it'll happen when and where you least expect it... ~Kristi Lynn |
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