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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
OK i wrote this about someone and it wouldnt be very polite to put their name in it so i'll use my own.. My name is Dana Wheeler and i'm here to say "I'm a big fat slob in a major way. I got two feet and I cant see the floor and when I get hungry I yell for more" {chorus} cause im a slob thats what I am. come on everybody and say it again When Im in my car going down the road, The shocks hit the ground cause the heavy load. I pull up a couch to a table, and when i try to get up I'm just not able.. {chorus} cause im a slob thats what I am. come on everybody and say it again Then when Im walking down the street, the earth starts to rumble under my feet..I cant get a job cause Im to fat, I sit around all day and I like it like that {chorus} cause im a slob thats what I am. come on everybody and say it again I cant get in the tub cause I'm to big, they take me to the beach in a great big rig. Little kids scream and shout "free Willy, free Willy is out" {chorus} cause im a slob thats what I am. come on everybody and say it again Ok its over!! sorry for anyone who reads this and takes offense I wrote it at a young age and it isnt really about all obese people just one in general that made me very mad.. |
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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
Hello everyone!! Im new and i would like to here what you think... please be honest even if ya think it stinks!! 8o) |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
hehehe  very creative dazed. i sat here laughing my head off.....and i need my head lolanyways keep writing, this was very amusing Bec |
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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
hey bec thanx for replying i didnt think anyone would lol |
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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
I'm bouncing this back up there for some more reply's....please read and rply |
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kayli Junior Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 27 |
hahahahahaah that rocks! how do you "bounce back up" stuff?? ~kayli |
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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
kayli all ya do is reply and it will bounce it back up heheheheh Dana |
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bulletproof2312 Junior Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 28Beaumont Tx, 77707 |
Intresting really....I never though about a song for obese people, but it works! *Smile* Skye "Here I stand I can do none other"---Luther |
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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
Wow, good but a little different! It is very creative Dazed. Lindsay |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I am glad it is only about one person, because some people have diseases and that which make them obese and they might find it demeaning or upsetting. It is quite funny apart from that! Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
Hey thanx everyone for replying i appreciate it!!! Yeah this song is about one person, and I made it when I was fourteen, Im now 21 and of course most of you know as you get older you dont find humor in the same things you did when you were younger... Thanx again Dana |
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