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Poem About Death |
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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
LOVED ONES COME LOVED ONES GO WHEN ITS THEIR TIME I DONT KNOW GOD CAN BE CRUEL JUST TO BE KIND SO PLEASE DONT WEEP OR LOSE YOUR MIND I KNOW ITS HARD TO PART THERES ALWAYS THAT SPECIAL PLACE FOR THEM IN YOUR HEART THEY MIGHT BE GONE BUT THEIR SOUL LIVES ON THEIR WITH YOU EVERY STEP OF THE WAY BY YOUR SIDE EVERY MINUTE OF EVERYDAY DANA WHEELER |
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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
Hey everyone!! nice seeing all your work!! Anyway if you would please comment on some of mine it would be highly appreciated!! Also be honest even if ya think it stinks!! 8o) |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Hey, I thought this was a good piece. I agree with much of what you say, except the part "God can be cruel". For everything there is a season and a reason (thinking out loud). Good job with this one. |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
*smiles* very nice poem, I like it. Actualy, I was about to write a poem on the same thing  Still will. Welcome to passions and I hope you enjoy your stay. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
hey thanx you 2 for reading this... Dragonfang Great minds think alike!! 8o) Danny I didnt actually mean he was cruel in a bad way what i was trying to say is it might be sad to lose some one but there is no doubt a reason for it... God can be cruel just to be kind.... thanx again guys!!! dana |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
i always admire poems about death, because it is such a real concept of reality, and to have the strength and determination to write about a loss is impressive. this is a great first post! welcome to passions and i look forward to reading more of your work Bec |
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huney_mel Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 52 |
well dont with this one! U have a talent, learn to use it more widely, with more topics...i wanna hear more from you! Love mel  XOX www.melsphotoalbum.homestead.com |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
I liked your poem. I know first-hand how hard it is to lose loved ones, and I feel you wrote about it well. Welcome to the forum, and keep posting your work, it's inspiring. *There is no destination where we are Please take me somewhere far Far away from this world of mine* (by me) |
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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
Hey lyric fetish thanx for responding!! I hope I'll get to see some of your work soon!! Dana |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Simply written, to the point, and full of new talent I can just see blossoming and helping this forum grow. Welcome to Passions and to the Teen Forum. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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