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huney_mel
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 52


0 posted 2000-03-13 01:43 AM


Sometimes i think to myself,
I dont know who i am,
I know i have to find myself,
AS quickly as i can.
I know my name, my age,
But my personalities not me,
Or maybe its a new one,
That im too blind to see.
As i get older,
I find my imaginations at an end,
All i can come to conclude,
I'm losing my childhood pretend.
I know theres more to adolecance,
But sometimes i cry,
I try to find the answer,
And i dont even know why.
I know im the only one that can,
Help me find the thing i need,
But i wonder how long it will take,
Before i finally succeed.

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4eva_at_heart
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

1 posted 2000-03-13 02:07 AM


mElLy!!
this is really good! this captures everything that the teen forum is really all about; being an adolescent.
i bet that everyone can relate to this

great post

Bec

Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
2 posted 2000-03-13 02:17 PM


Written with honesty and conviction I believe.  Conveys the thoughts that many teens must have.  All things come in time, even the knowledge of what your direction in life will be.  
Very nice piece I feel.

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