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since 2000-03-09
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0 posted 2000-03-12 10:50 PM

Sometimes I wonder,
What life would be,
If mummy went away,
All would fall down around me.
Mummy is my life,
Mummy is my friend,
Mummy is my idol,
Mummies life can’t end.
Mummy might have cancer,
And all my family is as scared as me,
Mummy looks fine on the outside,
But inside its hard to see.
Mummy is the strongest person,
Even daddy loves her so,
Mummy has been through so much,
Mummy never acts like she’s low.
Sometimes I fight with mummy,
And now I wonder why,
We fought over the stupidest things,
And now mummy might die.
If your mummy is well and alive,
Please, think twice before getting in a fight,
Mummies are things all people need,
I have to cope with all my might.
Mummy is so special to me,
If she went a big part of me would die,
Mummy taught me to be nice to things,
For melly to never lie.
Mummy taught me how to live,
How to shed a tear,
If mummy left me now,
I’d live my life in fear.
Mummy is never scared,
She lives her life so strong,
If mummy went away,
All would go wrong.
Mummy im saying this to you now,
Stay for me, I can’t let you go,
I love you with all my heart,
If you went my heart beats will go so slow.
Mummy I need you to be the grandmother to my kids,
The one who gives me the love I need,
Mummy without you here I feel,
I will never succeed.

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since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

1 posted 2000-03-12 11:05 PM

Mell....this is really good. i know how hard this is for you, andi just hope that evrything turns out to be fine.

great poem


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since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
2 posted 2000-03-12 11:07 PM

oh my god.... I now how you feel, a friend of mine may have cancer.... I do hope that your mummy is okay, and it is a very touching poem and an excelent tribute.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.

since 2000-03-09
Posts 95
3 posted 2000-03-12 11:39 PM

i am so sorry you have to go through this to my mom had cancer and they didnt think they would be able to get it out in time but she was  lucky...during that i felt the same way as this poem  keep it up you are doing great

 "scribere iussit amor" love commanded me to write

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since 2000-02-02
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4 posted 2000-03-13 12:58 PM

Mell this is such a touching poem. I can not imagine what you are going through but you have my support 100% and I hope that everytihng will be ok. Great poem.


since 2000-03-09
Posts 52

5 posted 2000-03-13 01:33 AM

It's Mel's friend Shan here.
I couldn't read the end of that poem, coz I had tears in my eyes.
Mel, I'm here for ya girl.
Luv Shan

since 2000-03-09
Posts 52

6 posted 2000-03-14 02:34 AM

its steph, mels sister here, and mel i love your poem! U are the best sister and i love you and we can go thro this togther...
Love stephy (peck)

since 2000-03-13
Posts 119
7 posted 2000-03-14 03:48 AM

mel that poem made me cry... great work but that is awful i feel for you with all my heart... I cant imagine life without my mom... my grandmother had breast cancer and they didnt think she would make it but ya know that was ten years ago and she is still alive and chipper...
your friend

since 2000-03-09
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8 posted 2000-03-14 04:12 AM

thanx so much everyone! i really appriciate your consideration and support for me.....
i really love you's!

Love always

since 2000-03-09
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9 posted 2000-03-15 12:44 PM

its ok everyone....mums ok....she just has a disease....nothing serious
thanx for yor support......

since 1999-12-02
Posts 148
Fredonia, NY USA
10 posted 2000-03-15 09:21 AM

  This poem was absolutely beautiful.  I'm so sorry that you had to go through all the worry and negative thoughts.  I just lost my grandfather to cancer, so I know how it is.  I'm soooo glad that your mom is ok!  

Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
11 posted 2000-03-15 11:22 AM

Wonderful words of love and expression.

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12 posted 2000-03-16 03:18 AM

i really appriciate it when people reply, it makes you feel soooo good. everyone who looks at this is a great poet too, it doesnt matter how you write your poet, and how good it is, its the passion you have for it. If you dont have passion, poetry wouldnt be so powerful like it is  
Everyone keep up the good work!  

since 2000-03-09
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13 posted 2000-03-21 08:37 PM

keep up the great and expressful work!  

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14 posted 2000-03-29 07:11 AM

sorry i have not posted any new poetry, i have to take the time to think of some more....i have too many commitments!  
Love mel

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15 posted 2000-04-13 10:05 PM

i have to go to holidays so i wont wbe here for a while so keep up good stuuf  

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Floating gently on a cloud....
16 posted 2000-04-14 07:22 AM

This is mom has had cancer twice but happily she made it through both times.  I know how you must have felt when you thought she had that dreadful thing, cancer.

I am so glad she doesn't have it.

Love and hugs,

 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

since 2000-04-09
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17 posted 2000-05-03 01:20 PM

Thats nice to hear. I wish everyone has a mom as good as you have.

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since 2000-04-30
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18 posted 2000-05-05 08:48 PM

Mel-  your poem is very good.  i couldn't imagine life without my mom and hope none of us do for a long time.  Im glad shes ok!!                                            -Heatherbear
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