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since 1999-11-09
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0 posted 2000-03-11 06:49 PM

From the Unicorn

Gallant knights carrying away fair maidens in distress
Or perhaps chase away their affections with slick finesse
Always there are two sides of a river
Always more than one reason to shiver
As the girls are left alone in the clearing
After the night they think they've won a heart
Only to be awakened by the howling of the wind
Sleeping by yourself with no other
But always there is a creeping white light
Circling around you in protection
She smiled at you in grace
Then flees when her calm words are spoken
Leaving you to wonder
About the swiftness of heart and soul
And the creature those talents reside in

Talented, pure of heart, she's the unicorn
We've all come to know as a friend afar
She would have never let us give up alone
She'd be right there to catch you when you fall
With her words
More than anyone can say
She's a friend
But never give up, Alwye,
Because we won't let the gifts you've given in friendship
All signed in friendship:
From the Unicorn

Hope you're back and kickin' soon, Alwye.  You know you've always got a fan of your poetry here.    


[This message has been edited by Astraea (edited 03-11-2000).]

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since 2000-03-09
Posts 95
1 posted 2000-03-11 07:07 PM

nice astraea i liked it a lot

 "scribere iussit amor" love commanded me to write

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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
2 posted 2000-03-11 09:30 PM

*beaming* Thank you so much, Astraea!  To have someone with a talent as great as yours write such a lovely verse for me is wonderful.  I'm trying my best to overcome this, thank you so much for caring.  

 *Krista Knutson*

"Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~

since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

3 posted 2000-03-12 09:22 AM

this is really sweet
great poem by the way


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