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0 posted 2000-03-11 06:46 PM

why have i never been
looked at by you?
are we really that
different, you and i?
are you just afraid
of change, or am i
really that strange?
NO, i'ts not my fault!
when is the last time
you talked to me?
if you ever did, you
would see who i am.
you would see that
i am not strange, i'm
not who you think i am,
if you even think
of me at all.
you think your so
untouchable - well,
you're not!
one day
you'll be sorry.
one day
i'll be prettier.
one day
i'll be smarter.
one day
i'll be richer.
one day
i'll be who you want.
and then --
you won't have me,
and you'll be sorry.
you'll see me, and want me
but you can't have me!

© Copyright 2000 maria g robinson - All Rights Reserved
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
1 posted 2000-03-11 06:58 PM

*claps, appluads, snaps fingers and all that other jazz* Love it. I don't know what else to say, it is kinda odd, but I love it. This is an excelent poem.   Keep writing the great poetry.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. ;)

since 2000-03-09
Posts 95
2 posted 2000-03-11 07:03 PM

this is really good pharon i liked it a lot there is so much feeling in it

 "scribere iussit amor" love commanded me to write

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since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
3 posted 2000-03-12 02:38 AM

ooo! it's filled with all the vibes I used to get from a girl I foolishly obsessed over.
Spanks for the poem

since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

4 posted 2000-03-12 05:36 PM

woo hoo! no one could have stated evrything in that poem better than you did

people who think they are everything and a gift to everyone kinda bug me :<

great work, hope to see more soon


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