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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
why have i never been looked at by you? are we really that different, you and i? are you just afraid of change, or am i really that strange? NO, i'ts not my fault! when is the last time you talked to me? if you ever did, you would see who i am. you would see that i am not strange, i'm not who you think i am, if you even think of me at all. you think your so untouchable - well, you're not! one day you'll be sorry. one day i'll be prettier. one day i'll be smarter. one day i'll be richer. one day i'll be who you want. and then -- you won't have me, and you'll be sorry. you'll see me, and want me but you can't have me! |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
*claps, appluads, snaps fingers and all that other jazz* Love it. I don't know what else to say, it is kinda odd, but I love it. This is an excelent poem.  Keep writing the great poetry."Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. ;) |
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emptyness Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 95mobile,Ala,USA |
this is really good pharon i liked it a lot there is so much feeling in it "scribere iussit amor" love commanded me to write |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
ooo! it's filled with all the vibes I used to get from a girl I foolishly obsessed over. Spanks for the poem |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
woo hoo! no one could have stated evrything in that poem better than you did  people who think they are everything and a gift to everyone kinda bug me :< great work, hope to see more soon Bec |
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