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rachella Junior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 39Indiana |
You are my best friend. I came so close to falling for you... Thanks for telling me you were falling too, but not for me-the friend next door. You fell in love with the stranger in the store. Simple to everyone it may be, but it is so hard for my own heart to see. I came so close to falling for you... Thanks for telling me you were falling too. |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
I like this poem, and I'm sorry things didn't quite work out the way they should've. I fell for my best friend, and after I told him, he tried to take advantage of that. Killer, huh? There's someone out there for you, just give it time. Just think, it might be your best friend, if the time is right... Just a thought... ~Kristi Lynn |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Nice poem and rhyme. It's good that your friend was honest with you. First sign of a good friend. Your friendship will probably be stronger now. |
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