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In Your Eyes
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In Your Eyes |
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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
In Your Eyes I asked you the question Then we sat and talked Your words were hallow And eyes filled with thought In your eyes I found Words Words trapped by the tounge In your eyes you warned me Teased me with feelings, i see In your eyes fear Lost in world of maddness With emotions standing still Dreams speek to me Your eyes still shine I'm defended by silence Defeated by time The end i know not Waiting to see what time buys But for now, i'm lost in your eyes 10-26-99 "Any fool can make a rule, and any fool will mind it." Henry David Thoreau Don't look... you might see. Don't listen... you might hear. Don't think... you might learn. Don't walk... you might stumble. Don't run... you might fall. Don't make a decision... you might be wrong. Don't live...you might die. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Someone said "the eyes are the window to the soul". This came to mind as I read your poem. I think this is really well written. "I'm defended by silence, defeated by time". nice lines. Good work. |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
Very well worded. I really liked this. Keep it up!  (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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sunshine17 Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 89Bonduel, WI USA |
Very good! I liked this poem a lot. I think you have written this very well. Keep up the good work. And remember to always keep your head up. - Gina |
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faith Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 89 |
That really was beautiful faith |
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Crystalina123 Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228 |
That was beautiful. "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive. Because when you love someone you control their version of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact, not their true situation at all." It's not the angry words that break the heart, it's the silence. Someone said that true love is like a ghost -- often spoke of but never seen. I've seen both and yet in my darkest hours, tend to believe that neither exits. |
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