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My feelings.... |
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Standstill_hand open New Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 6 |
Letting you go might be painful. For many days, with thoughts of not having someone to hold. But As life turn for the best, it must turn to the darkest point, where tears has to be shed, shattering affect has to took place...wordless crying, endless sobbing, and thoughts of something like an apendix being removed....Wouldn't be that bad....in the end, I'll be armless...But you'll be there to grab my other arm, and wrap it around you....... |
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sunshine17 Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 89Bonduel, WI USA |
Wow! What other words can I say to desrcibe this wonderful piece of work that you have written. Good job and keep up the good work. |
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Standstill_hand open New Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 6 |
Thank you, and I will keep up the good work......once again thanks |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Very interesting......you've got my attention at the very least. I'd like to see more samples of your writing.  Good one."The bullets you bite from the pain you request, you're finding harder to digest" -Collective Soul |
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Standstill_hand open New Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 6 |
geez, this suck...I want to write another exert from my mind, but nothing is popping..I'm too jolly or something, I need to do something to get the the juice flowin..... |
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Tara Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 76Minnesota |
this is so true. letting go is so painful. you expressed it wonderfully. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Some intersting expression and emotion here for sure. Looking forward to seeing more of your work also. Welcome to Passions and keep writing. |
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Standstill_hand open New Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 6 |
Life censorship, underminding ur truth in life...I feel distorted somewhat numb from my anger, only my fist clinch tight, my head is weary...my weak point is expressing themselve, my strong side feel hidden like it doesn't belong, I try many things nothing seem to work....reminising I don't know it doesn't work for me, it only cause me to think negatively....when its cold, and fire is building inside, what else u can do beside is being heard or trying to be heard of how much justices u want.... |
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