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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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I live so I must die. I love so I must be loved. I speak so I must be heard. I sleep so I must awake. I'm dead but did I really live? I'm loved but do I really love? I'm heard but did I really speak? I'm awake but did I really sleep? Am I really doing what I was put here to do or am I just living a lie? (if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- pom16pom) |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Well Tamma, You must die to sin to be born again into newness of life. Born twice die once. It's Sunday! I can appreciate your turmoil, before I died for my one time, I lived many years in confusion.  |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
I like this poem quite alot. It is very philosophical and deep. Good work. ~AF~ |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Very nice poem young lady. Some heavy thought processes here for sure. Good example of your writing skill. [This message has been edited by Danny Holloway (edited 03-07-2000).] |
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sunshine17 Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 89Bonduel, WI USA |
This is a good poem. Keep up the good work, and remember that you should always follow your heart, and trust in yourself after all you're the only one that has to live with your own lies. - Gina |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Tamma forget about your lies and get on with living...ENJOY life this is not a rehersal aurthor unknown to me...Just do it girl  Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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