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since 2000-01-14
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0 posted 2000-03-03 10:40 AM

I want to tell you this,
I think you'd like to know,
about this feeling I have for you,
one that's very hard to show.

I know right now it's true,
this feeling deep inside.
The only problem is that
it's something that I hide.

You know you mean the world to me,
and that I want to be there.
You know I want to be with you-
and just how much I care.

Now it's time to tell you
just what I'm trying to say,
is that I'm falling hard for you,
and I'm falling harder every day.

I feel like you've been sent to me,
like an angel from above.
I just want you to know that
you're the one I love.

~Kristi Lynn

© Copyright 2000 Kristi Stanczak - All Rights Reserved
Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
1 posted 2000-03-03 12:00 PM

This is a really nice poem.  Hope this guy feels the same way about you.  
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since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
2 posted 2000-03-03 12:06 PM

Same here Kristi, good luck, my friend!  

stay cool


 "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin

since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
3 posted 2000-03-03 01:58 PM

I hope he feels the same way, too.  I think he does, otherwise where would we be right now?  Probably not together, like it almost was to begin with...
Thanks again for your replies...
~Kristi Lynn

since 2000-01-24
Posts 67
el paso
4 posted 2000-03-04 12:14 PM

damn, I wish I could open up to someone like that. The first guy since my last boyfriend I have really liked, but its scary for me. Good luck w/ this one.

 Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love ~Smore

Junior Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 23
Peoria, Arizona, United States
5 posted 2000-03-04 10:23 AM

I love it I can't wait to read more of your stuff good luck with guys is seems you really care.
Junior Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 11

6 posted 2000-03-04 03:39 PM

That was such a cute poem! It brought tears to my eyes...i can relate in so many ways. I'm looking forward to reading more of your poetry! Good job...
since 2000-02-06
Posts 110
Clarksville, TN, USA
7 posted 2000-03-05 11:59 PM

Awww....that was just too sweet.  It can be hard to open up and express your feelings like that, but you did it beautifully as well as artistically.

Good luck with the relationship.


since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

8 posted 2000-03-06 02:49 AM

this is sweet. i feel the exacyt same way about that special one that i love. i always tell myself to seize the moment and not to be shy and hide away....but i can never bring myself to be completely open.

great work

since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
9 posted 2000-03-06 09:43 AM

I wish it was easy to tell Nate how I feel, but it isn't, especially for me.  He and I have been hurt so many times in relationships, and I know that I have to give him time and all.  It's just hard not to somehow say how I feel, which is why I write.  I'm patiently awaiting the right time to give him this poem- I hope it's soon...
~Kristi Lynn

since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
10 posted 2000-03-17 09:35 AM

I'm proud to say that this poem is being published...
~Kristi Lynn

Junior Member
since 2000-03-15
Posts 20
The Dalles, Oregon, USA
11 posted 2000-03-17 10:28 AM

I Loved your poem congrats on the publishing and I also whant to tell you from a guy's point of view. Make him make the frist move it may one of the most diffcult things but he will appreat the relasonship ahandred fold and you may find out how he realy feels at the begging insted of half way though wich be painful for the both of you.

                      Your new friend Steven

since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
12 posted 2000-03-17 10:34 AM

Thank you, Steven.
I did wait for him to make the first move-
it was harder than you can imagine, too.
He told me he loved me first,
and it means so much.
~Kristi Lynn

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since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
13 posted 2000-03-17 12:59 PM

Hey, I don't know how it is that i missed this gem. Very very sweet poem.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.

since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
14 posted 2000-03-17 02:13 PM

Thank you for your sweet reply, Sam.
It's nice to have you reply to all my poetry.
Love ya,
Kristi Lynn

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