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since 2000-03-03
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0 posted 2000-03-03 02:47 AM

Oh my god
I loved you so
You taught me everything
I should know
I was there when you needed me
I thought for sure it was meant to be
we laughed, we cried
and I never told a lie
but I guess it had to end
nothing lasts forever
when you find older friends
that said you could do better
I regret picking up the phone
that day when you said it was over
I feel so miserable
but you don't care
its been a month
and a few days
You've moved on
but can't you see
how lonely I am
without thee?
I would give anything
to have you back
I miss you so much
but I've been left to carry on
I cry myself to sleep everynight
I need you here to hold me tight
I lay awake at night
wondering if you regret what you did
but I guess I'll save it til the end.

© Copyright 2000 Bizzy - All Rights Reserved
Junior Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 33
Miami, Florida United States
1 posted 2000-03-03 03:40 AM

I thought this poem was excellent! I've saddly (*sniff sniff*) been put through that same situation too  
since 2000-03-02
Posts 50

2 posted 2000-03-03 04:39 AM

This is a sad poem but it is good that you are strong enough to write about it. I think that any guy that breaks up with you over the phone isn't half the man that he should be...but i still sympathise. Good work and keep smiling ok.

since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
3 posted 2000-03-03 08:27 AM

Very sad piece of writing here. I'm sure that there are many here in this forum that can relate with your poem. Welcome To Passions!


since 2000-01-24
Posts 67
el paso
4 posted 2000-03-04 12:22 PM

I've been in the same position, like majority of us have. The pain will lessen and eventually go away. Keep writing, youre good at it, and helps you past the hard times.

 Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love ~Smore

since 2000-01-20
Posts 89
Bonduel, WI USA
5 posted 2000-03-04 04:56 PM

This is a great poem expressing your feelings.  I know excatly how you feel because I'm going through the same thing right now.  I wish you luck in over coming this problem because god only knows how long it can take.
Standstill_hand open
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 6

6 posted 2000-03-04 05:50 PM

standing still, arm wide open only air pass me by, where has the physical body gone..gone gone...last words of hate, echoing through this empty head of can something that would seem to last forever can be me....I'm still standing, still rising, this is not the end..must prove to myself, and the outline of your shape.....*sigh* relieve seem to be far away, the sidewalk is cold, the wind is picking up, the cars are goin faster, childrens voices of innocence running by me....I must forget, and move one, time has changed...holding clincing fist, must be strong, they don't deserve my tears...But still I'm standing arm open.....

*a few word from me: I've in this situation before, I believe in fate, if something is not meant to be, don't be sad but accept what will come, there is a purpose for everything that happen in everyone's don't waste your time on something you will regret later on...  

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since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
7 posted 2000-03-04 09:51 PM

I'm sorry you've been hurt by this guy. My own philosophy on relationships this early in my life is that I won't let myself get so attached that I can't let him go, because then I'll just be getting my heart broken all the time. But I hope you can move on, and your poem was great.
Standstill_hand open
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 6

8 posted 2000-03-04 10:12 PM

actually, I'm not a girl, and I have never been broken before...lucky me, but come really close to it thou, even at the edge its hurt so much...I can't imagine goin way off.....thank you
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since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

9 posted 2000-03-05 11:11 AM

Great work Bizzy....and welcome to Passions!!


 "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders."

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