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devil_tongue
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since 2000-03-02
Posts 50


0 posted 2000-03-02 03:15 AM


I held you in my arms,
and I knew you were the one.
I knew that in this deed,
That the damage had been done.

For months I had tried to figure,
Who was sleeping with my boy.
Now that I have found you out,
I'll treat you like a toy.

You robbed me of my love,
You made me sit here and cry.
Why is it that my guy,
Had to look at me and lie?

I could have taken it,
I would have let him go.
But the way that he treated me,
Was in fact really low.

Go on then have your chick,
I wont give you any slack.
But if things don't go your way,
Don't even bother coming back.


[This message has been edited by devil_tongue (edited 03-02-2000).]

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4eva_at_heart
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

1 posted 2000-03-02 04:07 AM


firstly welcome to passions......and secondly this is a really great first post!
hope to read more of your work soon

Bec

Wicced_Witch
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since 2000-02-06
Posts 110
Clarksville, TN, USA
2 posted 2000-03-03 12:10 PM


I loved the poem.  It tells the way I have felt before.  I know it probably hurts right now, but it'll fade over time.  Better luck with future relationships.
Wicced_Witch
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since 2000-02-06
Posts 110
Clarksville, TN, USA
3 posted 2000-03-03 12:10 PM





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Maitay
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since 1999-07-16
Posts 158
Sisters,OR,USA
4 posted 2000-03-03 02:37 PM


IT seems like no matter what we do, we always manage to hurt someone. I hope that your boy didn't hurt you in such a way that you'll think of it every day. That happened to me, and trust me, not many freinds are very simpathetic in that area. Well I hope taht all things go good for you from here out.
             Maitay Mirabel Litton

Mystykyl
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 32

5 posted 2000-03-03 04:37 PM


i KNOW HOW ALL THAT HURT GOES. i WAS GOING OUT WITH A GUY, HEARD HE CHEATED ON ME, AND HE LEFT ME FOR ONE OF THE LADIES HE CHEATED ON ME WITH. THEN I WAS DUMB IN THE AREA THAT I TOOK HIM BACK AND MARRIED HIM. IT ISN'T WORTH IT. YOU HAVE TO LOOK AT IT LIKE THIS THO. IF YOU WOULDNT HAVE MET HIM AND GONE OUT WITH HIM, YOU WOULDNT KNOW WHAT TO EXPECT AND YOU WOULDNT HAVE KNOWN LOVE. I HOPE THAT YOU STICK YTO YOUR GUNS AND DONT EVER TAKE HIM BACK CAUSE ALL IT WILL DO IS CAUSE MORE HURT AND HEART ACHE. GOOD LUCK IN FUTURE RELATIONSHIPS AND THANK YOU FOR SHARING SUCH A WONDERFULLY WRITTEN POEM.
MISTY

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In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV
6 posted 2000-03-03 04:47 PM


well first of all Welcome to Passions! second of all OUCH!   great first post  

 (if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- pom16pom)


Smore
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since 2000-01-24
Posts 67
el paso
7 posted 2000-03-03 09:28 PM


welcome, this is great. I've been there, but  I could never overcome the feelings so easily.

 Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love ~Smore

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