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Wicced_Witch
Member

since 2000-02-06

Posts 110
Clarksville, TN, USA

0 posted 2000-03-02 01:13 AM

I tried to love you,
God knows it was tough.
I couldn’t even look in your eyes,
Your young life already rough.

But I just couldn’t do it.
No matter how hard I try.
I’d see him in your face,
And that only made me cry.

It took forever for me to touch you,
To love you as my own.
I kept thinking about him,
And felt scared and all alone

You need me to be there,
To pick you up when you fall.
To scare a way the monsters,
Hold you while you bawl.

I love your daddy, baby girl.
You’re his gift that will last forever.
I have to love and cherish you,
I guess its better late than never.

I know I miss him angel,
But I have you to hold on to.
Your daddy won’t be coming back,
So sad, but it is true.

At first I couldn’t hold you,
Now nothing can stop love.
I love my sweet little darling,
And your daddy, our angel up above.

AngelShell
Member

since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

1 posted 2000-03-02 01:51 AM

Wow, What a sad poem.
I can't even imagine how it would feel to have something like that happen. Regardless of whether it was true or fictional. I think that you captured the emotions and feelings well.

Good Luck,
AngelShell.

Wicced_Witch
Member

since 2000-02-06

Posts 110
Clarksville, TN, USA

2 posted 2000-03-02 11:57 PM

This poem isn't about me personally. It was the way things were with my best friend back home. Until she overcame her grief, I practically raised her daughter for about 5 months. Everthing worked out in the end and all is good now.

[This message has been edited by Wicced_Witch (edited 03-02-2000).]

angel6917
Member

since 2000-01-14

Posts 478
WI

3 posted 2000-03-03 10:30 AM

A very good poem, but so sad...
It's hard to imagine something
so sad happening, even though it can...
~Kristi Lynn

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

4 posted 2000-03-05 10:12 PM

Deeply sad and touching work. What a horrible thing to go through.

*Krista Knutson*

"Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~

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