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I Should Have Known |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... 
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I Should Have Known. I should have known, I was in too deep, I should have seen, The Hill was too steep, I should have realised, You'd change your mind, I should have known, My faith would be hard to find, I should have understood, The troubles we faced, I should have known, Memories can't be erased, And so you plaque me, Both day and nnight, There's nothing to do, There's no way to fight, I can't deny, The pleasure you brought, Nor can I change, The way your heart fought, So now it's over, I must move on, But I'll always remember, Those moments of song. |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
angelshell: this is quite good, though i'm not sure i understand where the "song" reference at the end fits into the rest of the poem... seems kinda haphazardly thrown in... might want to look at that part again.... sincerely, jerome the mysterious priest I'm willing to die to prove my God exists Are you willing to die to prove He doesnt? --[jeff bellew]-- |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Nice piece. I like the title and the way you used expression. |
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