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PoeticDreams
Junior Member
since 1999-12-23
Posts 35
Lindsay,Oklahoma US

0 posted 2000-03-01 04:53 PM




I asked the Lord to bless you
As I prayed for you today
To guide you and protect you
As you go along the way.
His love is always with you
His promises are true,
And when we give Him all our cares
He will always see us through.
So when the road you're traveling on
Seems difficult at best
Just remember I'm here praying
And God will do the rest


 ~¬§Always look to the
sunrise and you'll never
see the shadows¤~Anee
Frank

© Copyright 2000 Elisha Bennett - All Rights Reserved
poetry_kills
Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549
new orleans
1 posted 2000-03-01 09:39 PM


poeticdreams: this is excellent work    i'm really quite impressed... very mature topic and theology also... very impressive...

sincerely,
jerome the mysterious priest

 And their bleating was like a wet salmon
slapped upon the land---slap! slap! slap!

babychicken_1
Junior Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 11

2 posted 2000-03-01 10:50 PM


There are layers to this poem. The top layer is that god is powerful and he'll help you when the roads are bumby. The bottom layer is that you prayed for someone and its good that you told them that. Very nicely written.
hailfellow
Junior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 28

3 posted 2000-03-01 10:56 PM


AWESOME poem!  I really liked it a lot.  I don't have any fancy technical terms to use when I read it, but all I know is that it hits something in me.  Great job!

-hailfellow

hoppy
Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271

4 posted 2000-03-02 01:50 AM


Let me reitterate,  AWSOME!!!!!!!!  great work!!  Everyone should read this, truely a great work.

 "Any fool can make a rule, and any fool will mind it."
Henry David Thoreau

Don't look... you might see.
Don't listen... you might hear.
Don't think... you might learn.
Don't walk... you might stumble.
Don't run... you might fall.
Don't make a decision... you might be wrong.
Don't live...you might die.

angel6917
Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
5 posted 2000-03-02 09:48 AM


I loved this poem!  I have a lot of faith in God, and this one made me think of everyone I pray for.  I even printed out a copy to send to my best friend in Brazil.  I look forward to more from you...
~Kristi Lynn  

sunshine17
Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 89
Bonduel, WI USA
6 posted 2000-03-02 12:52 PM


That's a really good poem.  i enjoyed reding it very much.  Keep up the good work.

Gina

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
7 posted 2000-03-02 12:54 PM


Yep..definitely an ECHO in here..AWESOME POEM!! I loved it  

stay cool

~~Lavada~~


 "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin


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