Teen Poetry #2 |
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Fatal |
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potrygirl Junior Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 23Peoria, Arizona, United States |
Fatal Did you ever think day dreaming in class could be fatal? Did you ever think that being in love could be fatal? Did you ever think your dream date would cost you more then it should? It did. You went out with a jock who could have any girl he wanted and did. You went out with a guy with something fatal a guy with AIDS. I know you never knew this, niether did he. But now I stand here crying wishing, I'd told you not to go, made you go to the movies with me. I give you this final goodbye but you will always be with me in my heart, in my soul. -Stacye Walters- |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Too many times people do not think about things until it's too late. Exellent work and a very sad piece. *Krista Knutson* "Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
This is sad. good title ![]() Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This was really sad. unfortunatly these kinds of things are a reality. you described them well. Good work. ![]() |
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potrygirl Junior Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 23Peoria, Arizona, United States |
Thanks guys Stacye |
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